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Short Note:Buttonbelle shipping. I just had to, after watching "Don't Mine At Night" for what.... the sixth time now?
Elaina Mash, the loving and dutiful mother of Button Mash, dies after an accident in the Everfree forest. Her son, now orphaned, seeks comfort in the company of his closest and only friend.... and crush, Sweetie Belle, sister to the Element of Generosity.
Yet, one thing leads to another. Friendship leads into love, and love leads to secrets.
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Short story or long story? It's very rushed. I'm not sure 500 word chapters fit these types of stories.
7526431 i think it's fiiiiiiine.
besides, im one of those people were half the times i never get to 1000 words 
It's amazing
be proud 
Very nice story! Looking forward to see where it goes!
;) enjoying it a lot! I would suggest you change the car crash that killed sweetie bell's parents to a train wreck since there are no cars in MLP. I feel like you did really good with the charcters
YES MUST KEEP WRITING :D
Am i the only one who's wishing you like on life right now?
The positive feedback is really encouraging! I am so motivated! And, sorry for the lack of response, as my computer wasn't working for the past few days. Thank you all so much!!!!
7527869 Thank you for that piece of advice. It is very appreciated!
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cant wait for the next update!
No problem
7526431 To answer your question, this would be about... say... like sixteen chapters, more or less? Each with five hundred to six hundred words, it depends.
Just a question. Would you instead make 8 or 9 chapters that are a bit longer?
7536326 I'll think about it. That thought has crossed my mind a couple of times... but for now I think I'll stick to my current plan.
Murphy! Why?
7538299 Because I'm evil... don't worry, the story doesn't end there.
There is a tag for Button now
7878899 Thank you for reminding me, I meant to change it but it must have slipped my mind.
Love this story, its sad but great at the same time
Awesome story I wish I was this good at writing.//
8093458 I try! Thank you so much for such a great, heartfelt comment! I really appreciate fans like you!
Also, never stop believing that you can! One day, you might even exceed your own expectations!
Yours,
PenRoseAmber
So what was the message she left her son, and why did her sister not want to take in Button Mash? These seem like details you should have elaborated upon a little bit more, author.
FINALLY no but seriously,
don't leave us again
I love this concept... I just wish that this wasn’t only 2000 words long...
Did you by chance realize that you have two chapters with the exact same title?
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tails!?
9248817
YOU SAW NOTHING
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where is sonic?
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SHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
9275431
WHERE IS SONIC WHY ARE KIDDNAPING SONIC
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Wait, why didn't the snake kill Button if he was bitten?
Hate, to point this out, but ponies don't eat bacon, might want to edit this part.
awww poor button and sweetie belle :’(
just confess you’re feelings you two!
oh dear...