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Penroseamber


"Life is too short to hate." - Me

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For centuries, a changeling queen, Chrysalis, have been using a Crystal Heart for her own selfish reasons. Yet, when the pregnant queen of the Crystal Empire falls ill, the Heart is then taken away to heal her. Furious, Chrysalis kidnaps the baby, discovering the Princess's ability to grant her wish. Yet, when FLurry Heart turns eighteen, an unexpected stranger manages to help her escape... and steal her heart.

This is a story inspired by Tangled, the bestest Disney Movie Of All Time!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

I'm at a loss guessing who will represent Flynn? Can I get a hint?

Omg finally a tangled story with flurryheart innit! Pls don't die on us, I will be trackin this

7567742 Hmm... This may seem random... and easy to guess... but... fraternal twins.

is this gonna continue?

7571385 Of course... after I get well... :pinkiesick:

Sorry but i can't see Pound Cake as a 'Wanted Thief'

7844519 I'll take that into consideration. But you see, I figured that Pound Cake was probably the only male one young enough to play the part of Flynn, considering that both him AND Flurry AND Pumpkin are BABIES in the MLP universe. Now, if Rarity, for example, was Rapunzel, however... There would be a whole catalogue of possible Flynns I could choose from. As it is, Pound Cake was my only choice.

Two words. Awe. Some. :'D


I hope the thief, (or soon to be prince), is Pound Cake or some colt like that. :D

I would be cool if Flurry is trapped in the tallest room of the changeling kingdom, or if the lanterns had light-weight glowing crystals inside of them. Great job so far! :D

Ok I mostly comment on fallout stories but I went to theatres and saw tangeled. This recreation is a very good one, but you need more chapters. Hopefully you will come out with chapter number 3 soon

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