Six months after her defeat in her town, Starlight Glimmer comes to Ponyville seeking for revenge against the Mane 6; this time not only taking their Cutie Marks but destroying them as well.
Humiliated and defeated the girls simply disappear leaving the Kingdom at the mercy of its enemies for ten years… until the arrival of the Undead Knights. A group of seven unspeakable cruel monsters who protect Equestria at the costs of countless massacres, painting Equestria with the blood of its enemies.
Equestria’s ultimate protectors, the shadow of Harmony.
WARNINGS:
This story ignores Season 5 finale
And as all my other works this is a translation, the original can be seen here at FanFiction.
Chapters (3)
Your story has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon
That was good. Love stories with the protagonists that became cruel monsters.
Oh, battle against overpowered enemies. Classical!
Already at the end of the story? I could see such a potential for more in this...
Interesting. I should note that the grammer is a little off though. If you want people to read this more, it would probably help to make sure at least the front page is good. I mean just read it out to yourself; do the words 'Glimmer have won' sound right?
but why didnt they disappear the fact that they stopped her to prevented them from doing the ritual in the first place unless there was a new enemy after that that did a similar thing to them
It's like in Dragonball Z, where Trunks also wanted to prevent his timeline. But it didn't work that way.
Interesting concept, but poor execution. Reads like something someone with a 5th grade education would write. G1 villian or not, you first antagonist is... an army of penguins of all things? Really? Why not windings? If you're wanting the threat of cold? Then, the names the undead six choose for themselves.... those were pitiful at best. Offensive in how stupid they were at worst. Then the rest of the chapter reads like a giant cliche.
So awesome!
Uhh.....more please?
Tell me, why are you into such dark stuff about sweet little ponies?
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Why are you so into that?
when the next part of this trilogy???
Guh
The king looks really goofy.
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Good question.
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That very good question. A lot of Fanfic Authors do this.
Me: Twilight?
*PUNCH Twilight really hard on the face*
*Mane Five, Spike, Celestia, Luna, Shining Armor, Cadence: 😳
Shining: Hey! Who the heck are y-
*Me summoning the BFG ( Doom Eternal) *
Shining: 😨
Mane Five, Spike, Celestia, Luna, Cadence: 😱
Twilight:
Me: DON'T give me a reason to fire my Big F***** Gun on you, and turn you'll into a messy gore stain!
Now the reason I punch you Twilight is because of you acting like a jerk, and a ungrateful bitch.
Because One: Fate itself DOESN'T give a shit on what you think. You STILL end up like your "Dark" Counterparts. IF they DIDN'T want back in time and stop Starlight in the first place.
In fact, you should be GRATEFUL and Thanking Midnight and her Friends for saving your ungrateful asses by a dark fate.
Second: STOP FRICKIN calling your Counterparts "Monsters". Monsters are heartless, and Evil beings that KILLS EVERYTHING they see. Sure, they kill and brutalized. BUT, their NOT Evil! They only kill other baddies, and are willing to save you all and the Kingdom from future threats.
Their Anti-Heroes at best. IF they were "Monsters", they WOULD have kill ALL of you and everypony since day one. But, they DIDN'T!
Plus, you should at least feel sorry and pity them. They were YOU in the future. It's NOT their fault they look and act like this. It's Starlight's fault and she already paid the price. You COULD end up like them anyway, IF they didn't time travel.
You should thank them for saving you from a depressing fate. And apologize for acting like major Assholes to them. Who knows? You can even befriend each other and help protect Equestria for the REAL Threats."
Me: ( To Main Canon Twilight, Mane Five, Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Shining Armor in this Story.) "Your just ungrateful bitches!!!!"
I can't read just yet, but there is no sourcelink for the original work.