Ever since Octavia first caught sight of Vinyl Scratch on the Canterlot streets, Octavia's been in love with her. The problem is that Vinyl barely knows Octavia exists.
But love will always find a way, and Octavia is determined to win Vinyl's heart. So she gives Vinyl a call. And sends her a text. And a letter. And waits for her outside of work. And follows her around town. And rents an apartment across the hall from hers. And goes through her trash.
Not everypony understands the deep love Octavia and Vinyl share- including Vinyl. But that's okay. Octavia will make her see that they belong together, forever. FOREVER FOREVER FOREVER FOREVER FOREVER FOREVER
Darkly romantic comedy? Comically dark romance? Romantic dark comedy? Yes.
Cover art by radiationalpha and warpout.
Yandere Octavia x Vinyl?
Consider me intrigued. Please, do go on.
More please!
Dark romantic... comedy?!
~ Chapter: 13
I usually don't like Octavia x Vinyl stories but this one has me interested especially since this is the first time I have seen Octavia as a stalker towards Vinyl and that's a nice change of pace for me so I will favorite this.
Usually it's Vinyl being forward on Octavia, but Tavi turned fan-crazed S & M mare affection on DJ-PON3? Never saw it coming.
Does it like a boss.
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More soon, please enjoy!
Well, at least if you get together with this one, you won't have to worry about her cheating on you.
I hope Neon Lights isn't dead or something.
7502626 Nothing can kill me!
Hahaha!
Octavia is a creep, hehe!
Both are 'lusting like a hussy' for each other and trying to keep it family-friendly?
Only read to this point yet I'm already hooked! I like mysterious characters (up to a point), and so far, Octavia is one of the best I've seen!
Now it's become spooky! I can only guess what happens in the next chapter!
Dammmmmmmm
Yeesh, now that was creepy. o.o And where will she go now that her home is no longer safe? Guess we'll find out next time. Keep up the good work. :)
Octavia is a insane!
There's the burn.
Looking forward to another chapter.
You're on my radar now..
Octavia is a crazy psychopath in that story. I don't like it anymore:c
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Octavia being a crazy psychopath is precisely why I'm here
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Thanks for your vote and your comment! This is only my fourth fic ever and definitely my longest ever and I'm still learning creative fiction writing. It's good to know what readers are thinking and what they like and dislike- votes are great but feedback is a million times better so I'm grateful for the time you spent on your comment.
I intended on posting more and more quickly but I have black and red bruises on my chest and a bandage on my forehead from when I unexpectedly fell over and onto a steel handcart in the dark. And then my schedule otherwise got a little busy. So the fic isn't over yet and I hope you'll give it another chance when it's through. But I understand if someone might like their ponies and Dark fics without psychological disorders. It can be a sensitive subject for some people.
Anyway, thanks again!
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Same goes for you!
She must confront Octavia to settle this once and for all.
So compelling. Thrilling.
Makes me want moar!
Thank you for sharing this.
Enjoying it. Yes. Crazy Octy being sly.
There will be blood~?
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Ahem
Can't wait for another one?
So neons dead
No in my expirence you should never meet with a phyco stalker even in a nutral place it dosnt end well
Not gonna lie, it was a little difficult making my way through this chapter. There was too much exposition and nothing to really grab my interest other than wanting to power on through and get to what comes after.
Vinyl just run......
I ship octascratch but right now i'm that wise little voice in her head saying "DON'T YOU DARE DO TO THAT MEETING IF YOU VALUE YOUR LIFE VINYL"
Octavia
IQ: 240
State of mind: Sane in the presence of Vinyl Scratch, insane to any other pony.
Sorce of comfort: Vinyl Scratch
She is absolutely infatuated with Vinyl Scratch. She is in desperate need of metal help.
Advice to Vinyl: RUN
Hey Vinyl,
1,2 Tavi's coming for you
3,4 Bolt your door
5,6 Life's in a mix
7,8 She's at your gate
9,10 Death by pen
Octavia is going to slaughter you or love you to death.
Either way prepare to die
Poor Octavia, she was so close to making love to Vynil and then her craziness ruined it for her.
I could see Octavia tying up Vynel Scratch if she's not careful.
7506185 Hooooly furk, that's hilarious
Quirky.
I like quirky.
Well, let's ride this strange torpedo to the end. Or at least to where it's been taken, seeing as it's not finished yet...
Oh dear...
What did she do to Blue Sky? Or Neon, for that matter.
Deliciously creepy.
...still deliciously creepy.
Also dreadfully suspenseful at this point.
Yep, this get's a favorite from me.
Myself thus-far, in regards to reading.
Looking at story. Loving story. Thinking plot twist. she goes to meeting, octy truly sorry for actions. Last interaction she had with neon was that night with him and vinyl, was another psycho that killed him. Or, he got into Celestia's harem...
crse words in this are the only thing that makes me not want to read it
the words used instead, I mean
I wish there was more of this story.
I wish that there was more of this story.
I hope this story isn't dead...
Or, alternatively, he didn't jump, he was pushed.
And if it does, I'm sure that Vinyl will be getting warning signs.
Oops...well. RUN, VINYL! RUN!
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This would be nice. Unfortunately...I think that this Octavia has a bit more in common with the crazy Octavia from Puppet to her Fame than we want to believe...Only this time, instead of killing Vinyl, she seeks to make Vinyl her life partner!
I think in this one tavi has gone border line stalker
Vinyl with common sense even while hammered? That's refreshing.