While on their way to Manehattan for a new fashion show, Vinyl, Octavia, and Rarity realize just how mischievous magic can be. Now that they're all stuck in Vinyl's body, and in the little town of Trottingham no less, things can't possibly be worse. That is, until they are bitten by a peculiar, pony-like wolf. Now Rarity and Octavia must survive being Vinyl while also terrorizing anypony in the area. Well, there goes the idea of help... unless, of course, the Great and Powerful Trixie is feeling generous.
Chapters (5)
Well, here we go again. Sporadic updates, yay!
Art by: Raikoh-illust
well... this appears to be a whole new can o worms for vinyl XD keep it up, this should be entertaining.
Good start; looking forward to hilarity ensues.
Just wanted to crack this can of crazy open. No daily updates
Also, shoutout to OtterMat, my editor. He hasn't gotten here yet, and normally I wouldn't post unedited work, but I just wanted to get to this point.
Tell me what you think!
1003437>>1003438>>1003488 Thanks guys
Hope to live up to your expectations.
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"My Roommate is a Vampire" + "Of Two Minds" = a Cerberus? Er, a were-Cerberus?
...Carry on.
1006504 Had a feeling I'd get a comment like that. I was influenced by neither of them, actually. And honestly, is it that hard to believe?
1005930 Thanks
1006543 The fact that you've heard of them leads me to believe that you may have come up with this story while thinking about one or both of them, or maybe that one story where Fluttershy turns into a werewolf that I forget the name of, but no, I find it rather easy to believe that you came up with the Cerberus thing on your own.
It's just... it's just kind of... out there, y'know?
1006578 Eh, no. I've had the idea of making a werewolf story for a very long time now, ever since I gave up on my Cantervania fic a while back. As for creating the cerberus, how else would I get it there if I didn't join the minds? It's a brilliant idea in my opinion, and original if I do say so myself. There are plenty of fics out there that deal with werewolf ponies and joining minds, but I don't think they've ever been combined, and most certainly not in this manner.
I know it's out there, but if no one was willing to go out there, then how would we discover anything new, hmm? Either way, I hope you enjoy the story, and understand that I have stolen no ideas whatsoever.
A good point, and well made.
One last question: why Rarity? Why not another music mare like Lyra?
1006615 A good question. The answer is: because I wasn't thinking. Now that you mention it, it's a genius idea. Problem is, I have 11k words of this done
I don't want to rewrite that, and besides, it opens up a new ship.
1006645 D'oh!
Ah, well. I just asked because it seems like Octavia and Rarity are too similar in personality to make for varied interaction, but I'm sure you'll think of something.
1006660 Far, far ahead of you
A werecerberus...damit you can have this
Were Cerberus: when 1 head is just not cutting it
Oh yeah, Hilarity Ensues alright.
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Strangely enough, I don't recall publishing this.
Um... Okay then. Anyway, I suppose I'll leave it up. Short chapter and such.
Lynked, all I have to say is this—
You better have experience of being on a train because I've been on one for 21 straight hours, and there is NOTHING more excruciatingly boring than that. Okay, there was one time I was even more bored - the 21 hour train ride back to my house...
By the end I was something like this -
1018248 Yes, I have experience of boring train rides
Genius.
demanding more: ahem.
MOAR!!
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Because Rarity and Octavia know Vinyl is simple minded
The ergonomics of ponies and medieval-style weaponry now occupies my mind.
1019729>>1019969>>1024353 Hey guys, as always just wanted to express my thanks for the comments
1021210 And you. I laughed so hard at that. That was hilarious. Thank you for the laugh.
"there was the light sound of rushing water. She bit her lip and tensed up. “Aww man...”"
Almost assumed Vinyl let loose here, considering what's probably going to happen next she probably wishes she did.
Um, You know almost 1% of your last chapter was the word 'said'?
I think you should use more descriptive words...
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1095038 Hmm. First of all 1% is pretty much nothing, because 99% is other stuff. Secondly, saying stuff like 'argued', 'berated', and 'sputtered' is typically frowned upon. Generally, the word 'said' should be used.
Just my two cents...
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I commented because your characters stating what they implied with one reply can get questions when you ask me to share my opinion. Okay, I agreed with the way the disagreeing heads countered each other, but if they could argue without hollering at Vinyl so much.
Well, I think that's all the synonyms/improvements to the word 'the' that I can come up with without a Thesaurus
and sorry about this, I feel the need to do this because I like this story and really want to be able to focus on the story and not have my psychotic mind thinking about the word choice
1095141 I'm not sure if that was a play on words or if you made a valid point about the character interactions. (The first two sentences were extremely confusing.)
I try to vary my words, but honestly, I'm going to stick with the word 'said'. Ask anyone who knows a thing or two about writing. The word said flows. Using any word but would be detracting from the story
good story but......since when do ponies have paws?
1095178 Actually, the only time any word aside from said detracts from a story when morons use those particular words the wrong way. A truly talented author can use words like argued, berated, and sputtered without having those words detract too much from the story. I'm an English major, I would know.
Anywho, it is your story, so use whatever you want. Certainly an interesting concept if I do say so myself.
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Since they got turned into a were wolf.
The worst part about this wonderful story is that it's probably dead.