Vinyl loves Octavia. Octavia loves Vinyl.
A short, romantic slice-of-life with the fandom's favorite musicians.
(Rated teen/sex for sensuality throughout)
My inspirations include Mount Rushmore, Satan, and coffee.
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Very well done. I enjoyed the lack of dialogue. It's not often I find a story that is told this well without any speaking. I'd say you stuck the landing
very sweet, and very rare to read no dialog at all, its stories like this that make me just smile.
WAIT! are they human? you mentioned fingers a lot.
3903041 Nope! Just a slip up I make sometimes.
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3900430 Thanks! I like to write without dialogue. Makes you pay attention to the actions and descriptions more. I'll probably write more of these in the future.
Ew with the smoking. Otherwise, fairly well done
~OvO
3904438 Thank you.
You cheater. -_-
Seriousky, though: this was exceptionally good and quirky. ^_;
3933853 I had to laugh when you posted that blog post. Bwahaha.
And thanks! I had a lot of fun writing it. I think I'll make more in this vein of writing.
You certainly stuck it. It was an amazing short piece but was greatly detailed surpassing the level of a great amount of authors and it held my eyes on the screen. All in all, a masterpiece.
4025174 I thank you for such praise. I'm not sure I'm worthy of it, but thank you from the bottom of my heart.
A lovely story. I didn't even notice the lack (? that sounds so negative, but you know what I mean) of dialogue until reading the comments. Very well done.
You should watch the repetitions, though...
There are one or two other examples of it somewhere in there... I'm nitpicking here and I know it.
4095009 thanks! : Glad you enjoyed it. I'll go back and find those and fix.
Oh you stuck alright! And you better stick with it!
4533217 i will definitely try!
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Thank you! One question!? Why are we yelling!?
A wonderful little piece of atmosphere. Very nice.
You totally stuck the landing! OMG that was cute. Only thing: VINYL I DON'T KNOW YOUR MIDDLE NAME SCRATCH! HOW DARE YOU!!! THIS IS A NO SMOKING WEBSITE! (jk) Real cute i give you 5 mustaches
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Glad someone else writes Vinyl without dialogue. I do often, makes her more interesting in the context of some stories, but very hard to pull off. Good job!
5895604 Thanks!
very calm and relaxing story, with all the right elements to an OctaScratch shipfic
also I very much liked that shower scene :)
8574860 Thanks! Glad to hear you liked it.