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FoxyBubbles


Comments ( 6 )

For the first story, this is not bad at all.. I sure am staying here for more.

nice story mate, I also liked to see all the mane 6 there in some way. So many octascratch stories ignore the others, but you didn't, nice job :ajsmug:

4495763 where was the mane 6 mentioned?

4537467 whoops I meant background 6, silly me :rainbowlaugh:

It's a cute slice of life piece. Now and again I got confused by names/pronouns/epithets, but more of that was lack of knowledge than any fault on your part (though, I can't promise that's entirely the case). Still. Enjoyable bit of fic. Also, music parallelism and puns! (I might be more coherent if I posted this in the morning, but I am forgetful. Also, homework. :P )

This was a fun story.

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