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VeryConfused


Eh, you've read worse.

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Oneshot.

Vinyl Scratch is left home alone when Octavia leaves for an audition for the Canterlot Philharmonic.
What could possibly go wrong?

Absolutely

Friggen'

Everything.

Contains VinylTavia obviously.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 37 )

Noticed you haven't got any upvotes. So I gave you one. Happy Saturday! :pinkiehappy:

CWi

Adorable. Simply Adorable. :heart:

And Vinyl gets to live another day. I think Lyra was my favorite part of the story. Excellent work.

This was cute. I can understand Vinyl's terror; no one touches my guitars and lives.
Minor nitpick:

I shook my head to clear my head

Redundant sentence is redundant. :derpytongue2:
Thumb up, good job.

2663986 I'm glad you find it so. :yay:

2664039 Lyra was fun to write, thanks!

2664297 Fixed, and thank you! I don't know how I didn't catch that. :facehoof:

2665450 Yep! Unless the story really stinks and the author put no effort in, I feel like everyone deserves some up votes. Apparently, 9 others agree! And 1 is jealous!

2666659 Yes, all hard work should be able to get some appreciation, even something as small as an upvote.

Adorable story and a fun read...kudos all around. I particular liked the end...afterall...you don't mess with a musicians instruments and keep then from noticing. It's the same with any artists tools

2670646 Thanks! I know from experience...

2671446 Same here, except in my case it's my drawing tools and equipment :derpytongue2:

I'm sure your limerick-ing would even get pinkie's attention :pinkiegasp:

2696581

I don't think I have to mention
That in order to get Pinkie's attention,
I'd have to be quite good,
Which I think I would,
If only I used proper conventions.

I remember my girlfriend once broke my headset.
Then I was single.
:derpyderp1:

2699081 did she break the headset and then you broke up her or did you break up with her and she broke your headset

2707857
She broke the headset and I got pissed. She broke up with me.

This is brilliant! I can tell that you actually know what your talking about when it comes to the DJing equipment, and how it's all used.

*stares at computer screen with mouth hanging open* how the buck did you do that?

2785647 Thanks! I have friends who work with the equipment, and I use drum machines and mixtables somewhat regularly, so I understand the rudiments of DJing and such.

Such a captivating door....
There is plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. Example: and we sex.
Other than that, it was awsome

2875086 'and then we sex' was intentional, I'll try to fix the rest. Thanks! Oh, and, it should be 'there are' rather than 'there is'.

I love the pairing octiv3 and all I can say is you win sir and or madam

I applaud you. This is one of the best OctaScratch one-shots I've ever read. I absolutely love it. You earned yourself a follower in my person. :twilightsmile:

In other words:

Your fic I really did enjoy.
It did not make me jump with joy,
But brought about a hearty laugh,
The one of which there's not enough

In our dark and cruel world.
So, I will tell you in accord
With my opinion: that your fic
I love, or - Yankee English - "dig".

~Josh :twilightsmile:

3305673

If you'll excuse my odd diction,
I'd like to avoid making dereliction,
It was a joy to write,
on that one faithful night,
So, I'm glad you enjoyed my fan-fiction! :pinkiesmile:

This is a really good fic.

I love how "and then we sex" is used as a separate sentence in both chapters.

"What are we going to do about Octy's bass?"

"Oh, no. You mean you. I'm not in this."
"You have to help!"
"You almost buried me alive!"
"I'll tell Tavi."
"She'll just be too angry with you to care about me."
"Tavi'll tell your marefriend, and she'll be left to speculate why you were in another mare's bedroom."
"Consarnit."
"...Consarnit?"
"...I should never use that word again."
"...That's probably for the best."
"Yeeaaah..."

That is my favorite exchange out of the whole story.

Loved this story, actually reminds me of something I did in real life.

She once beat some poor stallion unconscious because he insulted her cello after dropping it accidentally.

She laughed when I said "unconscious". (We really need a Vinyl emoticon)
Just in case you couldn't tell, this is implying that Octavia actually beat the stallion into a coma.

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