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Small choices. Big choices. They all have the potential to completely change your life, for better or worse, whether you want it or not.
Octavia made one such choice when she decided to leave for Manehatten and start making her name there, rather than relying on Canterlot's posh society's respect for a wealthy, influential family name.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

Well now! This has certainly started off with a comfortable vibe, and I'm well intrigued for it. I already enjoy the relaxed feel of your writing, and this first chapter definitely teases at more fun to come. Excellent work!

I don't exactly follow this ship as a rule, but I'm always open to new ideas. Your introduction chapter is a gentle welcome to the possible idea, and that has me engaged.

Love the parental banter as well as Octavia's resolve, not to mention her willingness to pursue her passion as opposed to simply following in the hoofprints of her family's successful business. Lyra is bright and fun, and Vinyl is her aloof and sarcastic self, as most of us prefer.

Instant favourite, and looking forward to more in the near future!

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Not a bad start. Let's see where this goes.

This sounds good so far.

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Thank you! I'm really happy that you've enjoyed it so far.

Nice story so far dont let it go unfinished pls

I take it this story is pre nightmare moon correct. seems like a nice bit of an origin story I would love to be able to read more

6760718 It's technically taking place right before/during season 1, but since MLP timeline is timey-wimey as hell, I do what I want.

Great Job loving it so far!

Should be getting drinks and food everything is much more enjoyable when consuming something tastey

7092006 You can prove nothing.

7092125 :rainbowderp:

Love the Profile pic btw

It sounds like a good story from the description and comments but I don't want to read until it's finished.

This story has promise. Yes, promise.

Contrary to some demands of "MOAR" one may get, take your time writing. One thing I've learned over the years: Can't rush the creative process. Even if it takes a while, I look forward to the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

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