• Member Since 4th Aug, 2016
  • offline last seen Sep 3rd, 2016

Chris Abbey


I am hopeing that you all enjoy my fanfic and hope you keep reading mine and others

E

Doctor Whooves was dying and he had one last mission to do before he leaves he wants to go spend his last few moments with his wife Derpy Hooves and daughter Dinky hooves. He goes to the hospital and is hocked up to a a heart rate monitor. He has the nurse get his family he tells them what he has to say and then passes from this world. As Derpy and Dinky walked inside they find a surprise from the doctor.
Sorry for bad Grammar and Punctuation

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Why not get a prereader?

7500960 Word walls, big and thick, unless you copy and paste and make google translate read it to you. things that you need in a fiction = year, weeks, dates, and time, weather, more plots.

Things that can help you.

Groups = best three groups that I know that can help you.

"Looking for editors" by Silica

"The ProofReader Group" by Meeester

"School for new writers" by PegasusKlondike

Login or register to comment