"We're getting a Divorce"

Lyra and Bon Bon focus on how they are going to tell her daughter the most important decision of their lives.

Sweet Song by: Baka-Neku.

Thanks to Tide Hunter and Sparkletop Rainbows for the editing! You're the real heroes here!

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Tide Hunter

Tide Hunter #1 · Aug 16th, 2016 · · ·

I know you thought the ending was anti-climatic, but I don't really know of anything that would make it better, so here it is. Thanks for saying that we're the real heroes, but all we did was fix grammar, spelling, and change the wording to make it sound better. You did all the real work by writing it.

Smashology

Smashology #2 · Aug 16th, 2016 · 3 · ·

7483958 That's correct but here's the thing: English is not my native language. That's why no matter what I write if it isn't readable it's worthless.

Fantastic Fantasies

Fantastic Fantasies #3 · Aug 16th, 2016 · 2 · ·

This was a really great story! You should be really proud of yourself!

TheOneAJ

TheOneAJ #4 · Aug 16th, 2016 · · ·

-_-
Eh, nope

Iron Comet

Iron Comet #5 · Aug 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

And the Bon Bon started dating Octavia, who is confused because she is straight.

Silver Malice

Silver Malice #6 · Aug 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

This is great.

Chaserx

Chaserx #7 · Aug 18th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Nice

Eddy13

Eddy13 #8 · Aug 26th, 2016 · 1 · 1 ·

That...was actually pretty depressing. I mean, when you put the 'Comedy' tag up there, I thought something would happen that would convince Lyra and Bon Bon not to go through with it. I know the scenarios were funny, but the whole thing is basically 'dark comedy'. Sorry, but I don't find situations like this that amusing. You should've written a warning or something that the ending would be bittersweet.