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Caramel Drop

Lyra was having a good day. Then she stole a caramel drop, and her day became a lot hotter.

Brighter.

On-fire-y.

Probably shouldn't have stolen that candy.

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karnazom

karnazom #1 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Lyra: I Steal candy
Me: quickmeme.com/img/5a/5af9036ed383e3512413937fae245a4bc56d5612baf1541ae460738e372a567e.jpg

Maple Draft

Maple Draft #2 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · ·

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karnazom

karnazom #3 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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HAHA, that's a good one

RMWarPony

RMWarPony #4 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

This is golden! well done!

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #5 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Owch lol.

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #6 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

Cute story

EverfreePony

EverfreePony #7 · Jan 4th, 2019 · 2 · ·

This was a nice, little story, with the cinnamon part resembling a mix of horror and comedy—something I have never seen done before, but it worked well. Your grammar and spelling are very good as well The only thing I could really complain about is that the “epic” war ending seemed a little weak to me. It was over pretty fast, with no space to develop either the friendly atmosphere or to keep the feeling of Lyra at war. Still, if this was your first story, it’s pretty good.