It's just so lovely that you got to upload a new chapter on Christmas day.
Thank you so much! Merry Christmas!

7819127 It's Christmas? Oh right, it is.

Lovely fanfic, especially that castration scene. I haven't read it all, just two chapters but are there more of castration scenes like these in this fanfic?

8075239 I don't even remember where that scene is in this story! The whole show is sort of a pussy party, so sadly not very many males to hack and slash.

8075695 awww shame, but still, it was also an enjoybale part. It's in this chapter by the way, somewhere at the start, AJ ties up big mac and says these specific words: "Say goodbye to your favourite toy"

8228178 thanks at least you weren't rude about it

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Did you expect me to be?
I like getting well-reasoned criticism. Most of what I get is people whining because they have moral objections to the content.

8228577 WELLLL I guess a child getting fucked against their will is KINDA gross....maybe...😏

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g-r-o-s-s is not how you spell hot.

you have mental problems

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Everyone does!
For instance, some people take time out of their day to read something they know they will hate and then complain about it.

Thanks for making that comment though. Some of my fans were complaining that I don't get as many amusing comments as I used to. I was starting to worry that people gave up.

8315333
I read the description.
Why would I read something I know I would dislike.

8315348
That was a disappointingly predictable reply, but here we go...
You have certainly put me in my place and displayed your formidable intelligence by admitting that you took the time to whine about something you'd never even read. Thanks to your masterful debate skills and truly creative reply, which I have certainly not seen several dozen times in my story comments, I have now decided that I shall immediately seek professional help and never write another naughty thing.

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If you would actually read your own description, you'll be able to tell that you listed things such as " rape, death, foalcon, gore, and necrophilia " where you then list the contents of every chapter.
Because of your ᵈᵉᵗᵃᶦˡᵉᵈ description, I know what this fic contains and thus, I can safely say that I don't like this "story."
If you actually enjoy the type of content within this fic, you are indeed need of immediate help.
Or you can just be a troll who likes to make shockfics.

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Yep. I definitely haven't read the description that I wrote myself. Thanks for describing the reason why your comments make so little sense. Perhaps you believe it more logical that I should not clearly label my stories? Perhaps I should rope you into it, post in big bold letters "Danger: Story is not offensive at all" to trick you into reading it.
So explain to me, in your own words, if you have any (because so far you may as well be copying and pasting other comments from my stories), how my courtesy of making sure you know not to read my story is offensive.
Next, explain why you think that a lady that thinks fetus rape is an appropriate subject matter for fanfics is going to be reasonable, offended, or convinced by anything you say. Perhaps with an estimate of about how much time you've wasted amusing me.
But let's see. Let's see how deeply ingrained your white-knight entitled stop-liking-what-I-don't-like attitude goes. Will you reply to me again? If you do, I may be forced to not read what you said and post my favorite meme instead.

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1. I'm not saying that it's wrong for you to post the contents of you're story in the description. All I'm saying is that now I know what's in your story because of it, that now I can assume you need mental help.
2. Nice one. "Hahaha, he assumes I'm reasonable! Got him there!" So basically you just admitted that you need help.
http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/738/025/db0.jpg
Replace retard with demented.

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Exactly, no one is forcing me to spend 10 seconds to read a description, write and post a comment.

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You see, that's exactly what I did.
It doesn't take much time to make a comment either.

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Well I guess me mentioning memes and then you posting one adds evidence to you not having any thoughts of your own.
And you've posted three times since I looked at this? Really? Let me explain why I look down on you.
What you don't understand: You don't know me, but I know that I have a degree and a cushie desk job, and that people are willing to pay me sometimes over $1000 to write them a fanfic, and the admins here on fimfiction accept me to the point that 1) I'm not even required to submit my stories to moderation anymore and 2) They've personally showed up in my comments to tell people to knock it off without me even asking them to.
The best part is, if you knew me in real life, you'd never know that I write this shit. In fact, I'd be the last person you'd think was into it, which means...
Have you noticed how there are more people that normal non-sentient beings like you consider 'weird' online? That's because people aren't normal by your 'normal' standards; they just don't admit it out loud. Chances are, you know at least half a dozen people, probably more, into things that would make you absolutely despise them if you knew. In fact, I've found that many people that scream the loudest, like you, aren't really angry at the people they're screaming at. They're angry at themselves because they're trying to scream loud enough to flush something they hate from their own mind. It's like one of those anti-gay politicians that give a speech about how much he hates gay people, then next week gets caught snorting crack with a gay hooker.
And that was the end of my amusement: You're boring me now. I cease real replies when I feel like the conversation has become this, so don't expect more than 'too long didn't read' if you continue:

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I find it funny you call me a white night, but yet you block my alt account because you can't handle any criticism and so I can't reply to any of yours. This will be my last reply because I guarantee you're going to block this one as well.
1. I was responding to other person.
2. I don't care that you're friends with the people on this website, as do I, nor do I care you get paid to make this snuff. I also have a degree and a good, job but does that matter for this conversation? No, and yours doesn't either. It also doesn't matter that you're good at hiding your demented side to the real world, you're still demented because of all this shit you write.
Unless you're guilty of writing this stuff or to survive, I don't see any other explanation for a non-demented person to write about children getting savagely raped and tortured.

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TL;DR. Well, as soon as I realized it was you at least.
Creating a new account specifically to avoid a block when I made it clear that I no longer wish to speak to you (though flattering) is against the rules. I will be reporting it.
Nice of you to fall into that trap. Once again, you = PREDICTABLE.

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To be fair, though. You do have mental problems. *squirts lube into left hand* I mean, this shit is clearly the product of a disturbed mind. *rubs palms vigorously* Pretty disturbing stuff. *lights some candles, sets out some Bad Dragon toys* And now, if you'll excuse me, I have some reading to do.

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I prefer to think of them as psychological gifts, not problems
Also be careful with a name like that, someone might mistake you for Mercury Shine, lop off your head, and do 'things' to it. Though I don't know... maybe that's your goal.

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Hmm... I must say the thought crossed my mind (and then I got sticky and sleepy after it was done crossing my mind), but I think being turned into a gory fleshlight wouldn't really be my cup of tea.

8321802
Now I want to write about someone casually sipping tea with one hoof as they reverse-blowjob someone's head with the other.

Something something fiction isn't reality...

I read the whole thing in one sitting.

I'm still not sure just what I read, but it seems grimdark mcedgy edge.

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To me it seems like a commission from someone that paid me to write about a fetish they really like, but if your kink is kink-shaming, I won't kink shame that.
Or maybe your kink is self-torture if you read such a long fic that isn't targeted at you. Or maybe it is? I don't know; it's hard to tell from that comment.

I liked it