This story is a sequel to Thanatosian Love
The demon inside Twilight does not know her very well.
But it knows what she is capable of and contemplates their future together.
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Majin Syeekoh
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This is great! I love how the voice of the demon has improved since the last story and enjoyed reading (silently) it in the spookiest voice I could muster since I didn't want to scare my cat, who sat and stared at the screen as I read this. There were only two things to nitpick throughout the piece and that would be that it appears the bold escaped the original word it was supposed to effect and instead found its way into most of the story.
The second is a minor typo:
7464699 Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
I fixed the typo that you so helpfully pointed out, and it appears that the formatting when importing from a gdocs reverses where the bold formatting goes. Also thank you!
7464731 Sure thing!
I'll thanatos your impulse
7464877 Not if I impulse your thanatos first.
So adorable that Human-Twilight dreams of watching cat videos with Fluttershy.
I do dub this ship Sci-shy.
Also, good story. Make it a trilogy somehow.
7466154 I dream about doing computer stuff, so why not Twilight?
And I will make it a trilogy if the situation presents itself.
7466169 The situation has presented itself. Thanatos x Gaia Everfree OTP FTW!
7466174 I still wanna see how it plays out first.
7466179 Well, yeah. I don't mean you should write it right now. Just handing out a story concept for gratis.
7466206 Thanks. I appreciate it. I'll see if it works out like that.
This story is horrifying.
Well written, and it captures the unnerving tone of the first one.
7467559 Yeah, I was toying around in the draft before I decided to focus on what I personally find scary.
I'm glad that came through.
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There's a monster in your head. It won't leave you alone. It wants to kill your friends and destroy your world.
It loves you.
7467565 It's more the representation of fetishizing Armageddon that does me in, but yeah, when you put it like that I guess it would scare anyone.
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And it will never leave because it loves you so much. It knows that you love it too, but also that you don't know the right way to show it that you love it.
Ah, dammit. That's really just the most frustrating thing, isn't it?
7470417 I hate it when that happens, yeah.
Distressing is a good word for this one.
Holy shit. I didn’t expect you to be employing this style of writing, but you do it goddamn well.
7908218 Thank you.
demons aren't evil, lots of people get that wrong. they just have different ways of showing their emotions and can't comprehend any other way.
or, at least, thats how mine works.