Twilight Sparkle has an excellent idea.
And that excellent idea is taking LSD.
My entry into the Changing Seasons contest.
Edited by Aragon, Posh, Kamikakushi, and Themaskedferret.
Preread by Waterpear and Brasta Septim
We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.
Twilight Sparkle has an excellent idea.
And that excellent idea is taking LSD.
My entry into the Changing Seasons contest.
Edited by Aragon, Posh, Kamikakushi, and Themaskedferret.
Preread by Waterpear and Brasta Septim
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LSD leads to Shimmerlight?
I don't normally read romance, but you have my attention.
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I hope you enjoy it.
It's not even noon yet, you liar! I trusted you...
This sounds like it would be amusing.
Unfortunately, I ship Timberlight way too hard to read any fic that does not have that, so i'll have to skip this one.
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I said afternoon est.
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Hey man, I feel you there.
I don't even read romance normally unless I forget to read the tags on one of Bookish's stories.
There was more world-shattering villainous potential in that room than in a lot of bond enemies lairs. And they were trading drugs. Dis gonna be gud
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Timberlight? You mean... a straight couple? Ew, gay.
Holy shit on a popsicle stick
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I actually ship only a handful of lesbian pairings, none of which involve the EQG exclusive characters
I'll be the first to say it... GODDAMNIT SYEEKOH!
*taps tendril to side of eye*
...i liked this one, and especially where it went. oh gods, failed to resist this- it was a bit of a trip.
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There it is.
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I couldn't buy picture Lyra saying that. I blame the internets
Cute as a button. Specially liked how you made Twilight more world weary than Sunset, a little thing that made it that much deeper, with Adagio involved and all.
This was... fascinating. And enlightening. And emotional too.
Just, you've captured Sunset's character so well, and the drugs thing is really interesting and created some really unique opportunities for exploring the characters. The tone/mood of the story was also amazing - my heart felt really constricted the whole time I was reading this.
I think, as is stands, this is the top contender for the contest. Good luck and I hope you get the recognition you deserve for this.
I'll just repeat what I said on Discord:
Acid, EqG, and Adagio? This is the most Syeekoh a fic can possibly be without including any dank shit involving genitalia.
Also this is hella good
If you don't write a spin off series about drug dealer Adagio I will be sad
I dropped acid once.
Hydrochloric. 10M. On my hand.
It kinda hurt as my flesh dissolved.
GODDAMMIT SYEEKOH
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Syeekoh?
This is really good stuff, but there seems to be some grammar issues. Fix those and it'd be nigh perfect.
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It's a bit of a meme to curse my name whenever I publish an off-kilter story, and that tradition began when my username was just Syeekoh.
It's just a good bit of fun that people who follow my stories engage in.
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Ah, I see.
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I dropped base on my hand. Because I had a insulating five on at the time but not not something to protect against liquid on itched and when I took it off melted a quarter size bit of skin away
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First I was like, "Majin Syeekoh"? But then I was like "mAYYYjin syeekoh!"
Buying acid from Adagio with Sunset in the same room is not merely a bad idea, it's an absolutely terrible idea. (Un)fortunately, Sci-Twi has no idea!
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I liked you better when you were just Syeekoh.
The quesadillas are such a little detail, but they really drive home that this Twilight is not Purple Smart.
Welp! That turned out a lot better than it could have been. Both for Sunset and Twilight, and for you as an author. "LSD leads to Shimmerlight" is one of those setups that really shouldn't work, but you made it work quite nicely.
I never would have thought I could reconcile "SciTwi" taking LSD and it actually making sense. Huh.
The characterizations are just phenomenal. I could actually hear their unique voices from the word choices and sentence structures in their dialogue. They all felt like themselves, despite the peculiar situation, Adagio included. And all the little hand movements, facial expressions, and other little gestures just really sold them.
This was funny and silly, but this was also heartfelt and sincere. Sunset's struggles are so... believable, painful, relatable. I think a lot of us can understand how she feels about herself, Twilight, and even Adagio. Speaking of, the phone conversation between them was totally priceless.
I loved Sunset through and through, her inner thoughts and her concerns and her snark and her fears. I could totally believe Twilight's reasoning and rationale for her actions, too. And Dagi was a perfect mix of antagonist and... not?? She wasn't really an antagonist, she certainly wasn't a villain. Her role is very interesting because it doesn't really fit the normal categories you see her in. She's not "redeemed", she's still herself, and yet... hmm.
Very much enjoyed this. Despite the uncertainty you had writing a "serious romance", you blended your known style for silliness and absurdity with something genuine, and it came out perfectly.
I will forego the requisite goddammit syeekoh, since I do have a hand in this story.
But I will give you a stern trixie or two.
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Thank you.
I've read and finished this story. I enjoyed it all. Very well written.
Neat.
And so, your journey into the Dark Side of the Horse begins. Good. Soon, we will unleash the full power of your shipping ability....
Doesn't Twilight hate quesadillas?
So much win
I read the short description and I thought it was going to be a story about Twilight saying something along the lines of, "I've dropped a few times before," and it was really just her having had hydrochloric acid slip from out of her hands, or something like that. Goddanmit Syeekoh.
This guy.
Knows how to get views.
This can only end so well.
>>Romance<<
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Cute~
You describe people messing with their lips and tongue a noticeable amount. It's not a bad thing, just that after a while the mouth focus stands out.
Very weird. But also very cute.
That's a lot of dead people.
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Yep. That about sums up my thoughts on this story.
And that's how Adagio prevented SciTwi from going on a Rick Sanchez-esque mind trip. That's not an experience you walk away from in one piece.
Drugs are bad! That being said . LSD is a trip. sorry for the bad pun.
Hmmm well I can defenently say it's time to say it....oh wait this guy already said it for me.
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Also even the we have the traditional meme of goddamnit Syeekoh CW here has an amassing review that I agree with 100%
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*Also I can't can say say that this I should a the least a 7.5 on the goddamit Syeekoh scale.*
Reading this gave me flashbacks, and while it sure as hell wasn't a bad thing, it does make me wonder if you've done acid yourself. Or, at the very least, babysat someone else's trip.