(Warning! This fic is only dark due to the backstory. The main story won't exactly contain...much...darkness...Actually, ignore the dark tag. This is also my first attempt at making something properly dark, so excuse me if it seems a bit...out of order.)
Twilight has had enough. The existence of a cursed cemetary just on the outskirts of the Everfree forest is starting to annoy her. The worst part? Everypony says that there is a graveyard keeper called the "Shovel-Holder". To get to the bottom of this, Twilight decides to take Spike with her to that cemetary and get to the bottom of this growing legend.
However, what the young mare and dragon do not know is that there are some things in Equestria that should neither be explored nor tampered with. The tower in that cemetary, however, might be the end of the duo or might be their salvation.
That image comes from this fine chap here.
Good sir, it appears that you have made a typo in your description.
"However, what the young mare and dragon do not is that there are some things in Equestria"
I am assuming that word is intended to be "note"
(I shall read this at a more appropriate time, as it looks to be well constructed and it is late at the moment)
802655 *fix'd
It took two days for this to get read by the mods. I see that there was no real point in waiting eagerly.
803168 WAKE UP FASTER!
it was not groundskeeper.
IT WAS GOD!25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lnm3k3LGKp1qlr140o1_500.gif
Not bad. You can definitely tell an exciting story, though there are a ton of spelling errors that spellcheck could easily fix, and your descriptive language feels limited here and there. There are also a few places where you misused a word, like "quick" instead of "quite" or "wait" instead of "weight". Fix up those little flaws and this should be a much smoother and more enjoyable read.
Either way, it was perfect for the Halloween season.
1549317 Yeah. I have a habit of doing typos. I write too fast.