Everypony knows the story of how Equestria was founded. How the leaders of the warring pony tribes soon came together and founded Equestria. How the Alicorns appeared shortly after to protect the ponies from outside dangers. But, noone knows the origins of the ruins that have been engulfed within the swamps surrounding ponyville, nor do they know the significance of a lone door standing in the forest.
How will the Mane 6 react to their discovery when they find the origins of something that should have stayed in the past?
I have no idea who drew that image, but it fits a certain character perfectly. No, not "him". I've lost a bit of interest in the "dark" stories, so I'll be working on another story immediately after I finish From man to mare : chaotic convergence. This isn't cancelled, but until I find interest in it again, it'll be more of a burden than a pleasure to write this.
....ok? at least I didn't see much grammatical errors, this.... is special and much different than the previous story.... tracking until I can figure exactly what it's about.
338164 It's completely different than "From man to mare". I have the innate ability (not really an ability.
) to switch from a colorful, happy story to pure bloodshed and mangling. BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
"The blue pegasus"? hum... Fluttershy is a pale yellow and that's the main thing....
341985 Woops. I was thinking about Rainbow Dash when I wrote that.
Thanks for showing that.
First was Rainbow Dash now it's Twilight.
"The group entered the hut, just to see Twilight designing something for Rasberry."
Shouldn't it be Rarity here?
345673 WTF is wrong with me? I wrote Rarity in my mind but wrote Twilight instead? It seems that I'm slipping up right now. Thanks for warning me. It seems that my mind is working too quickly with this story.
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that's what beta readers are for lol
345823 How do you find the story so far, then? Should I slow down a bit? Show more on how they are going to cope with where they are while they search for answers and clues to the wherabouts of Rainbow Dash?
I like this story so far,
I did notice a few spelling errors in this chapter as well as the previous, but there are not that many
Oh, and I loved the Warhammer reference
346017 Then imagine the Yumis as being a defiler.
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It's alright, I'm still somewhat trying to figure heads and tails, and I probably won't be good for giving potential tips for such a story cuz dark isn't really my style.... as for the speed, it's good enough, 1 chapter a day isn't too fast and it should prevent your brain from overheating
346247 Yeah. It's still cooling off now, and the arrival of spring isn't going to make things better. I absolutely hate heat and, although I don't hate the sun, it makes things too bright at times. That, and everyone at my school seems to be becoming suddenly violent. My brain isn't going to be working very well until the week after next week, where I'm on vacation for two weeks. WEEKS!
I'm not sure.... but I think you finally managed to NOT write a wrong name
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2198609 It wasn't based on Warhammer. It was simply based on an early version of Blumarak. The idea died because everyone wanted me to make the second FMTM story. That, and I wasn't satisfied with the way I wrote it.