This does sound like something Sparrow would make, and I approve.

‘How will Twilight react?’ Barb wondered, but shook her head again. This certainly was going to be a big surprise.

OK, this needs a sequel where Twi and friends finally find out what happened to Spike/Barb! If only to see their reactions!

OK, this chapter left me with a much better feeling, you see Barb being treated well, she's happy, content, and she's not completely disconnected with her old life.

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I wanna see that!

Are you going 2 do one with Ember ?

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Glad you liked it!

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I have to admit I find the thought rather interesting. I mean, Barb walks with a group of male dragons into Ponyville. Awkward explanations ensues, followed by the Mane 6 being rather indignant about it, followed by the dragons corrupting the Mane 6 and maybe even the entire town of Ponyville to be more open and casual about sex.

Oh, before I forget, I wanted to ask you something, if you don't mind. I saw that you added this story to a bi and gay folder, which kind of confuses me a bit, since I don't remember to have put anything like that in this story. Or did you do it because of the genderswapped Spike?

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Yeah, I liked the idea that the dragons are not simply using her for her body, but are also nice and fair to her. For example the part where they are only keeping a small part of her wage, which could be counted as rent and a fee for the dragons finding her some partners as well as negotiating a good price.

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I was honestly thinking about how to fit her in best. I imagine Ember having a crush and being angry with Barb for her behavior. This might lead to one of two scenarios:

1. Ember is so angry that she takes the potion and genderswapps to fuck our naughty little Barb into submission
2. Ember will through some means be convinced to join Barb in a gangbang, maybe as a sign of good will or to see points from her perspective. Cue love confession during gangbang

7563278 MHM... How about:

1) after going 2 ponyville and doing what you told Alphamon_Ouryuken,

2) Ember tacks a 'other' potion, makes her futa, bucks with Spike/Barb

3) as a sine of peace between ponies and dragons, tacks one mare and one stallion as her personal buck-toys

4) Ember gives Spike/Barb to the ponies to be "there buck-toy'

5) the mane 6 tacks the potion, becomes stallions, bucks Spike/Barb, like it more being stallions (or at the list Rarity), and then start a Polyamory with all the mane 6 as the stallions in the relationship, and Spike/Barb as the "mare".

p.s. You know what I mean ?

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Oh, before I forget, I wanted to ask you something, if you don't mind. I saw that you added this story to a bi and gay folder, which kind of confuses me a bit, since I don't remember to have put anything like that in this story. Or did you do it because of the genderswapped Spike?

I what's conflicted due to the fact that Spike was a boy but then a boy on a girl's body.

I have to admit I find the thought rather interesting. I mean, Barb walks with a group of male dragons into Ponyville. Awkward explanations ensues, followed by the Mane 6 being rather indignant about it, followed by the dragons corrupting the Mane 6 and maybe even the entire town of Ponyville to be more open and casual about sex.

I was honestly thinking about how to fit her in best. I imagine Ember having a crush and being angry with Barb for her behavior. This might lead to one of two scenarios:

1. Ember is so angry that she takes the potion and genderswapps to fuck our naughty little Barb into submission

2. Ember will through some means be convinced or join Barb in a gangbang, maybe as a sign of good will or to see points from her perspective. Cue love confession during gangbang

Ok, these are both great ideas! Why not use them both? With a little twist!

Have Ember find out what's been going on and use her scepter to gender-swap herself and join in. After a long gangbang (in which she confesses her feelings) she takes Barb as her personal sex-slave while dominating the rest of the dragons that first fucked her.

After a while she sends Barb and her harem to Ponyville and the awkward explanations ensue, followed by the dragons corrupting the Mane 6 and all of Ponyville.

This fic NEEDS to be made!

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Both interesting ideas. Not sure which to do or what elements of your ideas to use, but then again, I have a lot of other fics to write and continue, so it will take some time until I get around to it.

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You mean if this will occur? There might be a lot of spunk around once the dragons are done!

7563935 Do both, mix them together

Ember makes her self a female-dragon with a stallion-hood

Bucks Spike/Barb, confesses her feelings

makes all the dragons into female-dragons, bucks them all, likes bucking Spike/Barb more them the other dragons

goes to ponyville, corrupts the town

the mane 6 have fun with the potions, 1-5 of them like it more being a stallions, then start a Polyamory-Relationship

as a sine of peace between ponies and dragons, they ....

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The idea is certainly interesting. I'm not exactly sure why Ember would want the dragons to corrupt Ponyville though. Or did you mean it like that?

Other than that I'm only unsure about her turning the dragons into females to fuck them and then turn them back. I... I don't know. It seems a bit awkward, or at least it probably will be for the dragons. I personally only use the R63 if a characters is going to stay like that then, to avoid awkwardness afterwards, like Spike who is identifying himself as Barb now. Of course that leaves open what she could do. Technically she is the Dragon Lord and probably can command them around like she wants, but to drill it home she could try different things. Maybe gangbang Barb along the others and showing she can fuck Barb day and night? Showing off more stamina? Or she rides the dragons cocks and drains them dry in her female form? Showing how superior she is? Maybe taunting them a bit?

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I'm not exactly sure why Ember would want the dragons to corrupt Ponyville though.

Ya, that part I only added to be nice.

Other than that I'm only unsure about her turning the dragons into females to fuck them and then turn them back. I... I don't know. It

How about they are stell male, but the have breasts and a vagin. Or jest one of the two.

seems a bit awkward, or at least it probably will be for the dragons.

Maybe she jest spoon them all.

I personally only use the R63 if a characters is going to stay like that then, to avoid awkwardness afterwards, like Spike who is identifying himself as Barb now.

What are the dragons going 2 do when they find out that she was that dragon that lived with the ponies ?
And can you have Barb and Ember goes to ponyville, jest to tell Twilight where is Spike. But them Flutershy and Rarity (or two others) gets tern into stallions, and starts a Polyamory with the 4 others.

Of course that leaves open what she could do. Technically she is the Dragon Lord and probably can command them around like she wants, but to drill it home she could try different things. Maybe gangbang Barb along the others and showing she can fuck Barb day and night?

And then Barb becomes the Dragon Lord's sex-toy
OR
Spike/Barb is stell the Dragon Lord and ...

Showing off more stamina? Or she rides the dragons cocks and drains them dry in her female form? Showing how superior she is? Maybe taunting them a bit?

Ya, do that also

Kinda late to the hype train, but I'll give my two cents.
For a sequel, to actually. One would be Barb going back to ponyville, to find out Twilight knew and was OK with it, for"Spike" had found happiness among dragons
Rarity was not happy, though. How dare a bunch of ruffians be more generous to her darling spikey-wikey than her?!? She'd then get a specialty brewed potion, made to interact with her element to enable the pony to give to her lover their innermost desire.
To be the brood Drake of the most virile, potent, gargantuan cock in the world. That Rarity grows and proceeds to stuff the ever living lights out of Barb. The dragoness, overwhelmed by such virility on her still remembered ladylike crush, falls in love.
They live happily ever after

In the second one, the dragons are sad to her their dragon slut for life leave, but they are happy for her.
Not one to see frowns go unturned, Pinkie manages to give them anther dose of Barb's potion... That Fizzle inadvertently sips from. Just enough so he doesn't seem to change... Until he checks his package.
The new tomboyish dragoness hides her condition until they arrive back home, when the rest of the gang find out and decide to give her the same treatment they have Barb. Including the big hoard.
Only the best for their Dragon Whore For Life

Anyway, have a fave and a follow. This earned it

8117494 I just now read your comment, and i would love to read that sequel^^
you maybe should try and write it yourself :P

Was a rather good story and idea to start, but was just clop for clop sake.

Maybe would have preferred a little more of a story of her maybe just agreeing to have sex and when they were all finished still at least trying to turn back. If she wasn't getting knocked up would have made it much much better.

Heat is often used to make characters helpless and always want sex I have been guilty of it myself but the female in heat can still have self control.

And that last chapter left a bad taste in my mouth. Regardless of anything she would have died. You obviously tried to end it on a high note with them letting her rest and all that but that doesn't make up for the rest of that lasted chapter.

Aw yis. This was a great read. The world needs more Barb smut.

Great job!

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My capabilities in storytelling are still a work-in-progress. I am not that good at it, so I try to improve and mostly feel the most comfortable with writing such short stories. I also simply love the Sluttification topic of having a female being dragged down to the level of a slut.

Dragons are flexible and it wasn't meant to be a near-death scene, or anything brutal like that. Simply some oversized smut like in the pictures of Sparrow with huge bulges and so on. It is kind of a fetish and definitely nothing on the gorey side like her belly suddenly exploding or anything gore-related like that. I pretty much just wanted some overstuffed fetish smut with loads of cum.

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It most certainly does! Barb is such a neat topic. I might try another fic sometime. I mean, I was thinking on a BarbxAngel and other animals bestiality gangbang clopfic. Of course not sure if that would be your cup of tea, but it is an idea that wasn't done before. And I really like the idea of Angel dominating Barb and whoring her out to other animals!

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BarbxAngel and other animals bestiality gangbang clopfic. Of course not sure if that would be your cup of tea, but it is an idea that wasn't done before. And I really like the idea of Angel dominating Barb and whoring her out to other animals!

where is part 4 of this story?

Holy. Fucking. Shit! This story was something I’ve been looking for. A sexy story with fetishes I’m into and damn, you need to do more with fetishes like this there’s not enough out there (especially the fetishes in chapter 3)

I would like to see more from this reality.

I was honestly thinking about how to fit her in best. I imagine Ember having a crush and being angry with Barb for her behavior. This might lead to one of two scenarios:

1. Ember is so angry that she takes the potion and genderswapps to fuck our naughty little Barb into submission
2. Ember will through some means be convinced to join Barb in a gangbang, maybe as a sign of good will or to see points from her perspective. Cue love confession during gangbang

Either or would be a fun read. I also noticed (and correct me if I'm wrong) but is there a bit of love shared between Barb and Fizzle? I find that cute and can see Fizzle as a doting clan father to the eggs/hatchlings while mom is at "work".

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Hm... Too long to really say if there was an intentional chemistry going on. I cannot remember doing it right now.

In any case, I am glad you liked the story.

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Didn't realize how old this fic was until it was pointed out to me. Any thoughts on continuing?

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I am not even managing to continue my Incomplete stories. A technically Complete one isn't really on my list right now.

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Shame, but I understand.

this fanfic is very spicy if you hear a sequence beard could have relations with the ponies of equestria during his visit