Part of me wants to nope out of here, but at the same time, i'm morbidly curious. I'll track it for now

I see there is more to come... Okay I'll stay, see where is this going.

7446730 Yeah... I'm the same. It's hot as hell, but stories that have fetishes change someone forever and affect those around them...

Seriously? Where the hell is Twilight those past eight months?!

7448019 Eh, she would be looking for Spike probably. Even if she went to Ember or the Dragon Lands, it would be unlikely to run into Barb. IF she ran into Barb, they wouldn't really know it was Spike from the appearance change to personality change and such.

7448601 I don't believe she wouldn't have some idea of what happened. There is no way she wouldn't have seen what potion was missing some and/or moved. She should at least know what happened to him. Now, how much she figured past that, appearance, where he went, etc. I can't say.

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Then I hope that you will enjoy the Bonus Chapter as soon as I have the time to write it!

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I thank you for your critique. I know that I'm quite the weak writer on the non-cloppy bits and I just finished editing the first chapter a bit. I hope it is better now.

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Technically Spike moved more than just one unlabeled potion, so that makes it a tad more complicated. Of course she still could have probably figured it out because the potion was missing some of it, but in the end she still would have no idea where to look for. It's meant to be like the story 'The Tribe' in that way. Barb loving the attention and never to be found by Twilight. Or at least I'm not writing that she is found by her. It kind of is an open ending in a way.

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I can imagine that. Only I have no real plans for her in this story. The Bonus Chapter will be nothing more than more completely shameless clop. It kind of is an open ending, since I have nothing planned about mentioning Twilight's search for Barb.

If it's got Barb, I'll give it a looksee.

7449095 Absolutely no problem whatsoever! I'm glad that you didn't take offense at anything I said, because I know that there are many people that would have. If you ever want my opinion or some advice in the future, or anything else, please don't hesitate to message me, not to say that you need it or that I think so highly of myself, I'm just offering. I have some projects underway, both clop and not, that I'm working on before posting myself. I look forward to any work of yours in the future. Good luck and stay safe!

Can i plz get the link to the full pic?

So when is that bonus chapter been out?

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Currently working on a few things, but I wanted to bring the bonus chapter out this month. But no promises! I've gotten a bit behind my plans since I couldn't log in for the past 10 days.

I know this is clop, but sexually, dragons would be fem-Dom.

Like other reptiles and social mammals.

Humans are the sexual exception not the rule.

Crocodiles, for example, are violent and brutal during sex.

When sharks do it, if there's not blood, they get disappointed.

This fem-Dom comes from the fact that in most of the great predators, with the exception of lions, are sexually dimorphic, favoring females.

Examples include hyenas, Spiders, Crocodiles, Monitor Lizards, Great White Sharks, Orca's, Owls almost universally, and Praying Mantids most infamously.

Good clop, though.

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Many married men would say otherwise jk

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep telling yourself that... But I will admit,”

“Not if it is the same one over and over,” he muttered,

“Who else would follow follow a bunch of dragons they don’t even know to a secluded cave entrance?”

This whole spectacle went on for another minute

up from the ground as her body made a horizontal line.

And the dragons didn’t waste any time as they started thrusting their muscular hips into her petite ones.

pleasure to the heavens above as her both her wholes were grinded to the core.