It is a story about Silent Trail (Sil), a unicorn who is Celestia's Private Eye of sorts, he is tasked with trailing Twilight Sparkle through her journeys. Follow him as he goes among the shadows to reveal a bit more of what happened than what the show showed.
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I have no idea why this currently has 5 thumbs down, and none up.
Sure, it's not super brilliant amazing, but it's better than a lot of the drivel on this site.
793351 It might be because I'm just starting out as a writer and like you said, it's not super brilliant amazing, or because this just isn't their cup of tea. Also, I have a lot planned out in future chapters that I will write than what I can convey in these two that I've done.
If I may offer my personal opinion, people on this site tend to write off stories with the Pony Generator used as the story picture because of how common it is. I'd recomend trying to stay away from using it if possible.
793433 Okay thanks... I'll try to find something else. I'm no artist, otherwise I would draw something.
This is interesting, can I be a pre-reder!? Please?!
It's a good story, It really is! I would just like to ask one thing:
How about changing the character's color scheme. No offense, but I've seen way too many dark-colored OC's to count. At least it's not a fucking alicorn.
Anyways, I liked it. Keep writing
793492 I'm not sure how that all works out, but if I knew, then yeah probably. I could use a second opinion instead of just blindly throwing chapters out
793587 Thanks! The color scheme is important because A) he's supposed to be kind of a stealthy pony and B) I didn't want an all black pony, since that would be kind of cliche as well. I also wanted him to be kind of a night-themed pony (y'know, the whole stealth thing). And I agree about the Alicorn thing.
793660 Ah, I see where you're going with the color scheme. very well then, keep on writing!
Bleh. This is getting boring. It's like watching the first 2 episodes all over again.
818836 I can't tell if you were halfway through when you wrote that comment and then gave up, or if you read the full chapter... but you could just skip to the next chapter if you wanted to.
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I read the entire chapter. Sure, it had Zecora at the end, but bleh.
820481 I was expecting this story to be a flop. I realized about halfway through that I had chosen a poor topic to begin with, followed up by the fact that I'm just beginning to write and have no way of knowing how to make things interesting.
Thank you for your feedback, it's very much appreciated.