With no recollection of prior events, and no idea of how they got there, the girls wake up in a dark room.
Finalist for The Writeoff Association's October 2016 event: "The Darkest Hour".
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Zaid ValRoa
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Zaid ValRoa
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That was good. I can't even add any nitpicks to it, that was just really good.
Ooh, nice.
I love this.
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I'm glad you all enjoyed it. As I mentioned in the author notes, I plan to turn this into a full fledged story in the future.
Until then, though, thanks for taking the time to read my story.
Wow... very cleverly and neatly crafted story with sprinkles of emotions. Kudos to your subconscious
At the beginning, the transitions seemed to me like a very original forms of line breaks, never have I thought they could have other meaning... I wasn't expecting such an ending nor twist when I started reading this. I think that made them even more was beautiful
So... The Main Six are dead, but there spirits are being channeled through a particularly strong-of-fortitude mare? Issat what's happening here?
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That's the spirit of the story, yes.
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Cool.
Can you please explain a little better what happened?
Did the main six fuse into one body and then entered a coma from the feedback and just woke up?
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Far off into the future, long after the death of the M6, future ponies create a spell who can summon the consciousness of the girls to serve as councelors through the difficult times Equestria has.
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Is it a synthetic pony a dead pony a posed pony or a magical projection, that is currently hosts the main sixes souls?
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A volunteer. It was supposed to be Serene Breeze's younger sister (as to have some common ground with Rarity and Applejack), but I never got around introducing that plot point.
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Ok. Thank you
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Not a problem. I hope you liked the story.
Full review here, but in brief: a clever concept and I like how the scenes run into one another. The ending was a bit hard to decode (I worked it out) and the OC is slightly bland, but the mystery is interesting. So have an upvote.
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Your link loops back to this story.
But yeah, I agree with you. This was hammered over the course of two days for a writing event, based off a weird dream I’d had a month prior. I want to turn this into a more fleshed out story, but that has fallen into the backburner as I focus on other projects.
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Thanks for the heads-up -- the link's fixed now. Shame you didn't have the time to expand this, but it's interesting even as it is. Arguably deserving of a [Mystery] genre tag, but the one it's got does the job.
I remember this one from the Writeoff. Still a fantastic head trip, no pun intended.