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WE NEED MOAR!!!!!
Can't wait for more. Personally, I'd love to see one of Luna's lessons with Twilight
Hey, cinnamon snarfs are a serious health hazard!
Awwww fluttershy would have been a great dkm for pet discord
#LunaBestPrincess
that about describes me as well. It was awesome to see another chapter get posted and I look forward to even more down the road.
This implies that Twilight hasn't seen Rarity for nearly two weeks. That seems a bit… odd. Was that intended?
Two weeks and school is already back in session? Another continuity error, I spot.
I will literally whore myself out to you in exchange for a chapter of Trixie and Starlight together.
;-;
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I felt like this chapter could have been a lot shorter and properly condensed. Given the amount of people that helped with this chapter, there were still a few mistakes here and there.
Luna is at least a switch! Thats good enough for me. Though, seeing as I'm a submissive, who can be persuaded to switch, and shes a submissive leaning switch, I guess she and I aren't a perfect match. But, if you think of her as being a submissive leaning switch who only switches for one special mare~ . . . Anyway, great chapter, lots of world building and such.
I have no idea if such a helper is good for Twilight, or will only lead to greater neurosis down the line.
Also, if I might comment on update frequency, I would personally prefer if you spaced out posts rather than bunching them together, as I feel they'd be easier to read that way.
Well, there go all my romantic aspirations. I'm told i'm fairly good with cakes.
: “Just why do you think I send her exactly there?
*Looks at the current avatar of the author*
Coincidence?
Loved the chapter, and thank you for using my art I'm glad you liked it enough to be in here, look forward to more!
oh, that reminded me of that Diskworld book where an Imp kept calling Vimes "insert name here".
this chapter also reminded me of another of my favorites, "shifting melodies", where one of Twilight's girlfriends dubbed her "princess of friendship with benefits"...she also has a Changeling boyfriend in that story!
and THAT made me think of one of Estee's stories, where Celestia and Luna were reminiscing about the "Discordian era" (when Discord ruled the world) and how "chaos storms" would randomly appear with no warning and randomly transform everything they touched...
Introducing Stable-Tec's newest innovation, the PipSub 3000!
JK, not really... as cool as that would be, though
Look who's talking, Miss Want-It-Need-It
You nailed Luna and Trixie on the head for me xD
thanks so much for the funny chapter. still do not like the villan. he is evil
I'll call you Gooseberry then.
Of this reference is what I think, it is awesome. If it's not... ok that might actually be more awesome.
Ok, best chapter!
I love the Pip-Sprite! So stinking adorable!