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This story is interesting mostly because of the setting but I think that it could be improved if it focused more on the main story itself. It has been over a year since chapter 8 and most chapters of this story are not part of the main story. While the manuals can help you understand the setting the rest that has no connection to Twilight's discovery would be better of in a separate anthology of stories.
There's an Anthology tag for stories like yours, you can use it if you like (though I just use it to make an excuse to make flash fiction.
oh, this made me think of a gag on that old "chainsman institute" website, where someone inverted a "gag-talk" language that could be "spoken" while gagged!
if i remember, they called it "mung"...
What do you have against diapers!?!
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People whom aren't into diapers won't necessarily appreciate them in the same way others do. Since a diaper is designed to contain the mess one creates, they might not like the feeling of said mess against them.
I could also ask you why you like them, since you apparently do?
Noticed two small errors:
“Off course we do, darling.”
“The list goes on, off course."
I really like Twilight's worries here. It's very her, but also addresses some of the expectations I'd had about the working of the Society. It's logical that not everyone would be able to do or up for everything, so this direct addressing was well appreciated.
I unfortunatly cannot tell what fetish this is meant to be. Is it watersports? Or something else, it is way to undefined and lacks important details.
Please, write a chapter where Twilight does get a kinky detention with spankings, that would be super adorable.