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rainbowspirals
You don't need to know who I am, for now.
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Not too bad, personally, not a fan of the 2nd person thing, but that's my own fault.
I like the plot and general idea, and I see twilight has found a better time travel spell that works on the affected's time stream so you don't meet yourself and cause paradoxes, nice touch.
I did spot a few mistakes in the writing.
Ponies don't have hands.
The second that should be to. As in "Another tip I have is to have"
Much should be many.
Good story idea and I hope you continue with it, happy writing!
I like it so far.
7374392 Whoops, it's actually finished o.o''
7375008 oh haha well good story
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Thank you so much for the tips! I am right now fixing these mistakes. You have a great eye, sir!