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Paradise Oasis


Royal librarian of Dream Valley, writer of Ponykind's greatest generation!

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Equestria... the land of friendship and ponykind, it was one of the brightest spots on the map of this world. Home to many different ponies of every shape, size, and description, it was a kingdom filled with a thousand different stories. Perhaps it is time some of those stories were told...

Short Stories of Equestria, all centered around a great, statue-topped lighthouse built upon the waters of Horseshoe Bay! Starring many different non-show ponies who made the toy line, with the main cast making guest appearances!

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This :rainbowkiss: This is beautiful! I love how well detailed it is (just like all your other stories) and how much it had in common with the Fourth of July! Sneaky :derpytongue2: As always, great work! I look forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

Great start!

If you don't mind my nitpicking, I would advise you to change 'tax dollars' to 'tax bits' just to have it match up with Equestria.

That ending! :pinkiegasp: Changeling? :duck:

7374362 I'm suspecting she's Luna too.

Comment posted by La Vallett1 deleted Jul 10th, 2016
Comment posted by La Vallett1 deleted Jul 10th, 2016

I wonder about the ethics of Love Potion, but thats a debate for another time.

7380552 Maybe the potion magically makes it ethically acceptable?

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I look at it this way; was what Cadence did to that couple in the wedding two parter acceptable?

7380728 I figured that was what you were referring to, yes. :twilightsmile:

It could be worse I suppose, the ships must have been wondering what happened to the light at least.

A white Pegasus, with a purple mane and bunch of grapes cutie mark... Sugar Grape was a worker at the Baltimare winery that was only a few miles from the beacon, she was a quiet and soft-spoken fellow who liked to hang around the lighthouse, and talk to her.

Should be changed to 'he', unless Seascape was imagining her coltfriend as a mare for a moment.:trollestia:

But her softy and quiet voice was lost over the blaring music, as the paty got going full swing.

'soft' and 'party'.

At the booze flowed freely, the party got even crazier.

'As'.

Everything seemed all right at first... until the splitting head came crashing down on her head, and the terrible ache throbbed in her flank... she didn't know which was worse.

'headache'.

If she learns from history, she can be doomed to repeat it? :pinkiehappy:

What, are you people stupid? It said “PURPLE” eyes, Luna’s are blue!

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