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Storybelle, Ponyville's resident librarian and storyteller, is always on hand to read stories and tales to the visitors who come from all over Equestria to her story loft. Listen now, as she weaves the tales of the interesting ponies who call a very special town called Ponyville home- a very different Ponyville from the one you know...
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Off to a good start. I'm intrigued.
This looks like it could be interesting.
I'm settling in for a good story
Ooh, yay! I'm glad this is getting off the ground!
The potential in this story is absolute! We hope you keep up the good work!
Love it so far!
This is a G3 fic!? The liberian was talking to me? GASP! The Liberian's talking to me as if I was really there.
I don't understand, it promised 34 words.
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I think the sites system derped
Considering the fact that G3 Rainbow Dash acted like Rarity and Rarity acted more like Pinkie I've always wanted to see a crossover.
I love how you kicked it off! Tee hee hee, yeah I remember your Fluttershy little camera obsession. Poor everybody! Who are we gonna see first?
This whole first paragraph hooked me in. Couple questions though:
1. Is this design of yours based off a play set? I'm pretty sure it's not, but thought I'd ask.
2. Would you have any problem with me drawing up blueprints or the such of this place?
Massive editing post incoming
Breaking stuff.
It's a
I personally would have put "We needed to measure those out correctly!"
Should have
Directions
I think your commas are messed up here.
Four hours
So, besides typos and the such, I really enjoyed this chapter! It's lovely writing and I hope to see more of this story!
P.S. If ya need an editor or something for this story, feel free to ask me. I ain't busy.
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thanks, but I actually want to keep the dialogue that way, to mimic the g3 Pinkie and Minty''s '5 year old speak' they had in the cartoon specials. Notice the more intelligent Storybelle's narrative did not have those errors.
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Storybelle and the story Loft are featured in the G3 Special 'two for the sky". shown here:
Neither one recieved toys, sadly.
A bit too much yeast I think.
Miiiiiiinty!
Great writing! Keep it up
Great job, Fanficfan!
Lovely.
I could clearly see the scene were they all drew their guns.
Good stuff.
"Well, hello there, traveler. I see your car broke down on this lonesome country road, a place so remote, that no one can hear your screams!…Pretend I didn't say that. Come in, come in, but be warned. If you enter, you may be subjected to my tales. Tales designed to sell my merchandise! Ah-ha-ha-ha-ha!…Sorry, I was…thinkin' of something funny I heard earlier."
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I see where you're going with that, and it ain't funny. Yeah, G3 had a lot of merchandising, but so does G4 and pretty much every other cartoon. Sure, G3 might not have been as subtle, but it was a show that did what it set out to do- entertain (and sell). But who are we to judge?
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Cannot tell if sarcastic or serious, but the G3 ponies have weird opposable hooves.
Denim Blue = Applejack
Rainbow Dash = Rarity
Storybelle = Twilight
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Naw, I was being serious. Meant it was well written.
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Tenchnically, Denim's a stallion, but he does act like AJ a bit.
6613719 Demin's a stallion!? I dunno... Denim looks like a mare.
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All G3 toys look that way, sadly!
6613922 It really doesn't help that I imagine Denim with an effiminate voice. Hey, at least this fic isn't cringe-worthy.
I'm guessing that Maretonia is the equivalent of Mexico or something? I like Fiesta already.
Ooh, Razaroo!
I know you're trying to imitate Hispanic, but I can't help but feel that some of the wording sounds a bit more like Jamaican, especially near de beginnin', mahn.
Otherwise, pass the popcorn, we're in for a real show with these two.
(Also, for the title, if I remember anything from Spanish class, it's that "si", no accent mark, is not the same as "sí", accent mark, so right now this chapter is kinda called "Much If!")
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I'm trying to make her a hybridization of all latin american cultures, hance the mixed accent. And thanks!
This wont end well.
¡Hola, poni! ¿Cómo estás? ¡Muy bien, gracias! Me llamo Fiesta Flair, mi tengo—
"Oh, tú no hablas Maretonian, eh?" might be better.
¡Qué pena¡ ¡Qué pena!
buenas
señorita
This chapter's title, "Mucho Si" doesn't make any sense; no matter if you wanted "very yes" or "very if," it's just plain weird.
Seriously, if you're going to use Spanish, at least copy-paste the special characters from Wikipedia or something.
Also, I have to say that, although I know you're trying to convey a Hispanic accent, it's actually a little annoying to read. Just sayin'.
I like Fiesta.
She's cute.
1. Cotton, not cotton
Sounds like she's kinda similar to Pinkie over here. <--
2. Cotton Candy mention.
Also, I did not expect any feels, yet I got some.
This was cute.
6625749 Thanks! I was the guest author.
Thank you again Paradise for letting me write a guest chapter!
It was really fun and I'm honored you let me be apart of this.
That was quite fun to read.
Ooh~ Mystery! Loved it!
But are princesses allowed to fly in hot air balloons?
Haha, it's funny how you try to use spanish... algunos errores, sí. But i liked
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The broken and misused Spanish is supposed to be part of the gag!
but thanks!
Ooh~ Nice!
I wonder if the next chapter will pick up on her being somewhere else? Even if it's just referenced?
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It probably will be touching on that, but here's another question; what will ponyville do without a princess?