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Dear God, i love it, I love everything you've written. An idea for the future, if you need one, a group stuck in a house, but are "found" and treated like bugs. Heh, you could even have a "colony" and have it get exterminated XD
Anyhow, keep writing! Your amazing!
I have NO clue what to even say here. This story is just so weird... it's like a train wreck. I know I should probly stop staring but... I can't look away.
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Its a fetish based clop fic. Were you not aware of that before you read? Clearly this isn't your fetish so it probably best if you moved along, this fic isn't for you.
7410606 Or you could not downvote someone's comment because they don't explicitly state their love for a fetish you love. I never said I don't like the story; quite the opposite actually. The fact I said, and I quote:
I specifically stated I couldn't look away. Save for the last chapter (Which I skimmed 'cause sweat isn't really my thing) I read every last bit of this story. Why? Because I actually did like it. But at the same time, I didn't. I do have a vore fetish, and an unbirthing one. Those check boxes were ticked easily in this story. But at the same time, I do not like heavy vore. I'm not a fan of people being dissolved and mashed up and chewed in half.
The fact that I clicked on this story to begin with, knowing what I was getting myself into, shows that I did in fact like what I saw. I don't necessarily love the story, because it's a half and half for me, but that doesn't give you the right to shit on my comment simply because I didn't explicitly say "I love it."
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If I may interject here? In regards to NightmareKnight's choice of words, I honestly found them rather delightful. I wasn't sure if it was the premise you were talking about, or the fact that the Narrator has the attention span of a squirrel on crack, or something else entirely, but a train wreck is a surprisingly accurate depiction of what I've written.
And PartyPony, I appreciate that you're defending the story--really, look at that downvote bar! If I didn't know how unpopular this fetish was, I think I would be disheartened. But if someone doesn't like the story because of it, I would prefer they were just ignored, or at the worst downvoted, rather than provoked--that way they won't come back.
Honestly, I left two warnings in this story. Two! If they went ahead and read it anyway, knowing that the fetish isn't their thing, they're either trolls or illiterate. Unless they're spamming the comments section like jerks, they'll probably move onto the next story and forget this one--which is, in my opinion, the best thing that could happen.
So whaddya say, guys? Could we just chalk this thing up to a misunderstanding and move on? I'd rather not have a miniature war going on in the comments--think of all the casualties! It would be horrible.
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Apologies, I was very clearly in the wrong here, and completely misread that comment. I personally wasn't into the previous chapter either, just not my thing. Though many times I see people come in a bash something other enjoy just because they find it a little strange and I get pretty defensive. My comment was extremely reactionary, rude and totally uncalled for. Sorry for acting like a prick.
7412591 Apology accepted. And I do understand your reaction. I see a lot of random down votes or just flat out "This story sucks" just because it has a particular fetish someone disagrees with. Hell, you should have seen the- I hesitate to call it as such, but it seems the best choice of wording for what it was- comment war on a story I co-wrote with my bf. Was called a cunt simply for telling the person "Don't like it? Don't read it. You were warned in the description". Guy actually got something like 30+ down votes on his comment before he deleted it. And before you point out how similar to this situation that one is, I know. But the context was a bit different (That being his original comment was something along the lines of "This is disgusting and you should feel ashamed of yourself".)
Anyways, I'm rambling. I try to not leave comments on something if I don't have anything constructive to say. If I had an issue with this story, I would try my best to leave a comment explaining my reasoning (Everything just kinda goes better that way, for both me and the author) rather than just say "Ew, your story sucks because fetish" and leave it at that. Either way, no hard feelings between the two of us. I understand where you're coming from.
7412532 Honestly, yeah, this fetish is a bit out there. I mean, I don't think it's the craziest fetish out there, but ya never know. For me, it's one of those things where I'm just like "...I'm kind of turned on, but at the same time disgusted". Weird subject matter, but definitely not bad from a literary standpoint. I may have noticed a grammar mistake here or there (Don't quite remember) but nothing too glaring that would detract from the story. I probably won't add this to a bookshelf or give it a thumbs up, but I certainly won't down vote it. It's just one of those stories where I read it, I go "Kay... neat" and move on. Wish you the best in your future endeavors, see ya around.
Okay, let me tell you why this writing style doesnt work...
Its not bad, its good but its not FITTING. I feel like I am blind in this, I want to see what the "narrator" sees. The jokes dont work without the visual punch line, you know? This would work great on an animation or comic but on a writen format like this? Sorry but it just bothers me sometimes.
But if you want, you can stick with it, it doesnt ruin anything...