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Your story is really good! I love it ^^
Didn't you just research this? What, did all the ponies all just suddenly become sadists and decide to step on, eat, or just leave tiny beings they could see and hear just for the fun of it?
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Because they dont know they are there.
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Exactly what McProky said. The entire point of keeping it Unaware is that these things can happen without tainting the Ponies. You pointed out a serious flaw to that goal; sooner or later, humanity would have been noticed, and I'd have no reason to keep going with the story. In no way are the ponies in this story sadistic, murdering equines hell-bent on the genocide of the human race.
If its any help, you can imagine most of them were in Manehatten, where it would be too busy to be noticed, or that the elements took them--winter isn't a good season to be lost outside, after all.
The fact is, I had to think of something to believably make them go away without pretending they were never there to begin with, and that was the easiest and, in my opinion, best explanation to offer.
7372668 See, there's a problem with that, inevitably the humans will be discovered. The main problem with unaware stories that try to remain unaware throughout is that it ends up painting the unaware party as not just unaware, but rather completely oblivious, like to the point where you wonder if this person or these people have a problem accidentally running into others, walls, opened/closed doors, etcetera. Already I can list quite a few examples from your story:
1. In the chapter where Lyra eats the two kids on her sandwich, the problem is that teeth have this odd function where they act like sound amplifiers. Obviously there's already the problem that both Lyra and BonBon would've been able hear their conversations in general as they were ant sized, but then inside her mouth would have been just as clear. Then of course there's the whole bit where her tongue swishes them around. The tongue, like a few other places is actually very sensitive, in horses and ponies even more so, Lyra in all reality would've been able to feel them struggling and squirming.
2. In the chapter where Starlight sits on and unintentionally ends up with several doomed hitch hikers within her vagina, one in her urethra, and a few clinging to her tail. Well, the first problem is that Twilight being the studious mare she is or Starlight who is also a very meticulous and detailed mare, could've noticed the group on Starlight's chair to begin with, I say could've as we don't know who sat down first or from which side they entered and such. I realize that this group was of the much smaller set, but it was still a very large group and all bunched together, making for a very strange splotch of color(s) on the normally all purple couch, this way ends up with total survival of the group. Now, if you want the casualties, which it seems you do, then perhaps Starlight sat down before either could notice, however there's the new problem, the fact that all these people ended up crushed under/stuck to/inside of Starlight's erogenous zone. This zone is part of those very sensitive areas on the body, and in this case, beyond sensitive. Simply put, even at that size, Starlight would've felt them, especially since they are struggling and in the case of one particular person, purposefully heading deeper. Upon which, she probably would've jumped out of her seat, causing the secondary breaching of her very personal zone, which would send her into panic. Ending up with Spike being sent away to preserve Starlight's feminine privacy, while Twilight being a mare, takes a close look to see what is the source of Starlight's discomfort.
3. In the latest chapter, besides the fact that the ant sized ones would've more likely been discovered rather than being squished, eaten, or starved to death, let alone that if that happened to them the smaller ones would've had it even more severe, there's once again the fact that it's a very large group of them surrounding a large crumb in the middle of a room, at this point Carrot Top must be blind in order to have not seen them.
With that, I bid you farewell and good luck with this story anyway.
If I may add an idea as well, perhaps a small group get in the
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