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Oh dear... I do wonder what would happen if they ever did get noticed. I assume they'd look like any other ant to the untrained eye.
Don't you mean tale?
Hmm, that second story perfectly matches my interests, at least until the bleak ending. Still, both have a lot of description, good setup, and some nice word choices. All in all, a good read.
This story is great! Although, the first chapter could have been longer...Also, do you take suggestions on next chapters? :-)
Extremely small size and unaware aren't precisely my thing, but the writing is very good. Tracked and looking forward to future updates.
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Tail was meant as a pun, so it was all very intentional. Nice catch, though.
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Thank you for the compliments. The chapters, I'm afraid, will often have bleak endings. I highly doubt being as small as the humans are in this story would be good for the longevity of life in any event, but I can promise that not every chapter will end on such a dismal note.
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Thank you. I wanted the chapter to be longer, but ultimately I decided it wasn't worth it to add unnecessary fluff to what was meant as a simple introduction. As for your question, I was planning on working something out later on down the line in regards to requests and suggestions. I'm kind of particular about how I take them these days. If you're willing to just give me the idea and let me work out the details in my own creative process, I'm much more likely to accept a request than if you tried to give me a rundown of what you want.
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The basic idea is that the super tiny humans are lost inside a mane of somepony, Cadance for example, but to them, it is huge and filthy jungle :D
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Heh, well, hope it keeps going then. Oh, and if you're up for it, can I suggest a scene with the Wonderbolts and some unaware hayburger vore?
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If you're currently willing to take suggestions, an interesting idea at some point might be humans finally getting the attention of a filly/colt with a magnifying glass, only for the assumption that they're just regular ants. And what else would some bored kid do with a magnifying glass and ants?