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MLPfan438

MLPfan438 #1 · Jul 4th, 2016 · 2 · · Ironic Changes ·

Not a bad start, grammar and spelling were good and the main character seems likable so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Brony Of Dust

Brony Of Dust #2 · Jul 4th, 2016 · · · Ironic Changes ·

7361225 Thanks! Because english isn't my first language I've always been a bit worried about my writing skills. Glad to hear people enjoy.

01201303

01201303 #3 · Jul 4th, 2016 · · · Ironic Changes ·

I'm wondering what type of military training your character has. Does he know Krav maga or capoeira? I'm just wondering.

Brony Of Dust

Brony Of Dust #4 · Jul 4th, 2016 · · · Ironic Changes ·

7361364 Now I wasn't with Sinboto (my friend who the character is based off of) when he went through his training in the regiment. However he's spoken to me about his training and he's gone through:

Weapons training. (rifles, smgs, pistols, and the like)

Riot control training.

Jungle/forest combat/survival. (in Jamaica and Bermuda) If I remember correctly he also received desert training.

Close quarters combat. (Specificly he's disturbingly good with combat knives)

He also knows aikido but that was from before he joined up.

Generally he went through what training you get with any British rifle regiment. Anything more specific and I'd have to ask him personally.

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