Not a bad start, grammar and spelling were good and the main character seems likable so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

7361225 Thanks! Because english isn't my first language I've always been a bit worried about my writing skills. Glad to hear people enjoy.

I'm wondering what type of military training your character has. Does he know Krav maga or capoeira? I'm just wondering.

7361364 Now I wasn't with Sinboto (my friend who the character is based off of) when he went through his training in the regiment. However he's spoken to me about his training and he's gone through:

Weapons training. (rifles, smgs, pistols, and the like)

Riot control training.

Jungle/forest combat/survival. (in Jamaica and Bermuda) If I remember correctly he also received desert training.

Close quarters combat. (Specificly he's disturbingly good with combat knives)

He also knows aikido but that was from before he joined up.

Generally he went through what training you get with any British rifle regiment. Anything more specific and I'd have to ask him personally.

Good luck with your story and keep up the good work.

7361496 I'll do my best!

eh half half for me.

7367737 That's 50% more than zero!

Love the Story So Far keep it up

dis wassup

More!

Guess this one's dead then... Was a good first chapter too