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Uncle Smiles


Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

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7345348 It came to me when I saw a fan art of Tracer bugging Reaper with a song.

7345371 Thats a good thing,:pinkiehappy: It means Im going to read it and watch for more

If you're the law, then i will break you. Let's see how long those six shots will take you. When I'm in my wraith form, i will un make you. Don't come near me in my death blossom. I'll put you in coffin with out a problem. My shotgun rain hellfire upon you. No atter were you go, DEATH WALKS AMONG YOU!

You my good sir have caught my attention. I can't wait for more updates to the story

(reads description)

Violet is a sweat and intelligent ten year old girl who always keeps her brother in check, make sure he eats well, that he wakes up on time and so on.

sweet and makes

Trevor even bought a costume of Tracer for her little sister and a Reaper costume for himself.

They had only spent one day in California before things went south after buying a life like replica of Tracer's Pulse Pistol and getting Reaper's Hellfire Shotgun.

By unknown mean these two sibling now find themselves in a world unlike their own. A world full of magic and being thought to be myths and legends.

For Trevor, a new world isn't a problem for him, it's keeping Violet safe by any means necessary.

her? you mean HIS little sister, don't you?
siblingS.
beingS.
consider changing that last to....

For Trevor, a new world isn't a problem. For him, it's keeping Violet safe by any means necessary.

7345797 In my defense, I wrote the description around 3 A.M and I was bloody tired.

7345767 Just saying, I wouldn't mind if one of my stories crossed with this one.

Wait, are Trevor and Violet still human or are they anthropomorphic ponies now? Other than that, love the story so far.

why does this setup remind me of no game no life?

Ok, you got my attention. So far quite interesting. Dont mess it up or I will be verry disapointed.

7345920 We don't know, I think it's being said like that due to it being Twilight's POV...ish so Stallion was used instead of man, aside from that, I'm going to assume human due to the characters they dressed up as

7345921 Good premise! Needs some edits, rewording to be more effective, some misspellings here and there, but overall good. Definitely tracking this one! Btw, eta on next chapter?

Nice story bro, you surely earnd my follow and upvote.

Any eta on the next chapter?

Not bad. Short but writers block can be held accountable. If you got this much then all's well and good. Now here's hoping the block goes away, cheers!:raritywink:

THE OVERWATCH IS COMEING, BAD GUYS BEST BE RUNNING. HEROS NEVER DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEE!

You know, this is probably the first Overwatch crossover if seen so far, and I gotta say not bad. Chapters are a little short but it doesn't bother me. Keep it up!

I'm liking this more and more! Keep up the good work!

Well then, looking forward to see what you do with Gengi.

Tentatively intrigued. Would like to see a little more.

Hmmm I expected Road Hog to be a fat Minotaur.

So I'm gonna guess Reindhart is going to be a Minotaur too.

7381769 Meh, I made him a Gryphon because it wouldn't make much sense how a Minotaur managed to sneak out some weapons from a country that isn't his home.

And yes, Reinhardt will be a sixty five year old Minotaur. For an old man his fucking beast in the game.

I can't wait to see where this story goes

when will the next chapter be out?

This is pretty good, I will say.

"We're all Soldiers, now."

7380116 Quick on the draw, I'm a natural deadeye,
Me and my peacekeeper won't let you get by,
Six quick shots and i leave no witness,
I'm the one who keeps the undertaker in business,
Welcome to the courtroom, I'm the judge,
And i won't give justice without my gun,
Don't believe me? Come and see it yourself,
If you want proof just read the belt,
If you're the law, then let me break you,
And see how long those six shots will take you,
When I'm in wraith form they don't break through,
Fear The Reaper for I will unmake you,
Don't come near me in my Death Blossom,
I'll put you in your coffin without a problem,
My shotguns rain Hellfire upon you,
No matter what you do Death walks among you
Overwatch, its back in town,
If you're not a hero don't stick around,
Jump in the fight, and don't be shy,
Cuz if you're with us you know a Hero Never Diiieeessss

I find the reactions of Twilight and Trevor a bit strange. I mean, why would Twilight ask a complete stranger for help? She technically doesn't even know if he can fight or provide anything useful. And why does Trevor accept to fight for/help a stranger, especially when he is more of a gamer when a fighter. Wouldn't he want to bring the girl away from danger, instead of stepping right into it? :rainbowhuh:

Still want to see where you are going with this though, so I will track it for now. :pinkiesmile:

7494009 Trevor fights for Violet's well being. If needed, Trevor would effectively beat the ever living shit out of anyone who tries to harm her.

As for their reactions, I couldn't, for the life of me, write anything better than what you see.

Slight error in the description.

For Trevor, a new world isn't a problem. For him, it's keeping Violet safe by any means neces

Well, that escalated even quicker than I anticipated! Good read, can't wait for the next!

I thawt I saw a Gengi.

It looked similar to the women she and Trevor had met moments ago, only this time the stranger was male. He wore what she could assume was some sort of advanced suit of armor. His mask covered his face and the visor emitted a green glow along with some parts of the armor.

I did, I did see a Gengi.

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