Trevor Young, a responsible young man by the age of twenty seven and Violet Young, a sweet and intelligent ten year old girl were taken and brought to Equestria as the one's they were dressed as and in the middle of a changeling invasion no less.
Not bad. Short but writers block can be held accountable. If you got this much then all's well and good. Now here's hoping the block goes away, cheers!
You know, this is probably the first Overwatch crossover if seen so far, and I gotta say not bad. Chapters are a little short but it doesn't bother me. Keep it up!
7381769 Meh, I made him a Gryphon because it wouldn't make much sense how a Minotaur managed to sneak out some weapons from a country that isn't his home.
And yes, Reinhardt will be a sixty five year old Minotaur. For an old man his fucking beast in the game.
7380116 Quick on the draw, I'm a natural deadeye, Me and my peacekeeper won't let you get by, Six quick shots and i leave no witness, I'm the one who keeps the undertaker in business, Welcome to the courtroom, I'm the judge, And i won't give justice without my gun, Don't believe me? Come and see it yourself, If you want proof just read the belt, If you're the law, then let me break you, And see how long those six shots will take you, When I'm in wraith form they don't break through, Fear The Reaper for I will unmake you, Don't come near me in my Death Blossom, I'll put you in your coffin without a problem, My shotguns rain Hellfire upon you, No matter what you do Death walks among you Overwatch, its back in town, If you're not a hero don't stick around, Jump in the fight, and don't be shy, Cuz if you're with us you know a Hero Never Diiieeessss
I find the reactions of Twilight and Trevor a bit strange. I mean, why would Twilight ask a complete stranger for help? She technically doesn't even know if he can fight or provide anything useful. And why does Trevor accept to fight for/help a stranger, especially when he is more of a gamer when a fighter. Wouldn't he want to bring the girl away from danger, instead of stepping right into it?
Still want to see where you are going with this though, so I will track it for now.
Not bad. Short but writers block can be held accountable. If you got this much then all's well and good. Now here's hoping the block goes away, cheers!
THE OVERWATCH IS COMEING, BAD GUYS BEST BE RUNNING. HEROS NEVER DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEE!
7380116 Except for when Mercy dies.
You know, this is probably the first Overwatch crossover if seen so far, and I gotta say not bad. Chapters are a little short but it doesn't bother me. Keep it up!
I'm liking this more and more! Keep up the good work!
Well then, looking forward to see what you do with Gengi.
Tentatively intrigued. Would like to see a little more.
Hmmm I expected Road Hog to be a fat Minotaur.
So I'm gonna guess Reindhart is going to be a Minotaur too.
7381769 Meh, I made him a Gryphon because it wouldn't make much sense how a Minotaur managed to sneak out some weapons from a country that isn't his home.
And yes, Reinhardt will be a sixty five year old Minotaur. For an old man his fucking beast in the game.
I can't wait to see where this story goes
when will the next chapter be out?
This is pretty good, I will say.
"We're all Soldiers, now."
7380116 Quick on the draw, I'm a natural deadeye,
Me and my peacekeeper won't let you get by,
Six quick shots and i leave no witness,
I'm the one who keeps the undertaker in business,
Welcome to the courtroom, I'm the judge,
And i won't give justice without my gun,
Don't believe me? Come and see it yourself,
If you want proof just read the belt,
If you're the law, then let me break you,
And see how long those six shots will take you,
When I'm in wraith form they don't break through,
Fear The Reaper for I will unmake you,
Don't come near me in my Death Blossom,
I'll put you in your coffin without a problem,
My shotguns rain Hellfire upon you,
No matter what you do Death walks among you
Overwatch, its back in town,
If you're not a hero don't stick around,
Jump in the fight, and don't be shy,
Cuz if you're with us you know a Hero Never Diiieeessss
More please I love it so far
I hope to see more soon
I find the reactions of Twilight and Trevor a bit strange. I mean, why would Twilight ask a complete stranger for help? She technically doesn't even know if he can fight or provide anything useful. And why does Trevor accept to fight for/help a stranger, especially when he is more of a gamer when a fighter. Wouldn't he want to bring the girl away from danger, instead of stepping right into it?
Still want to see where you are going with this though, so I will track it for now.
7494009 Trevor fights for Violet's well being. If needed, Trevor would effectively beat the ever living shit out of anyone who tries to harm her.
As for their reactions, I couldn't, for the life of me, write anything better than what you see.
when is this going to be updated?
7380116 JT Machinima reference?