booo Booo!

and its a dead story

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Hmm?

Have I done something wrong and if so, what may that problem be?

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Didn't like it? Was there something wrong?

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No! Yes!!!!

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A conflict of interest?

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Just a small test

Well.... the duo is here...
And the boom loving one fucked up

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I really suck at story descriptions, like terribly.

Even if I wanted to change it, i can't. I lack the skill to do so but nevertheless, thank you for your input, I'll be sure to keep it in mind for future fics.

If you've read the story and somewhat enjoyed it, it is my goal but if you haven't... Well, I can't succeed in everything, right?

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It doesn't help that I use my phone for this stuff and unfortunately have big thumbs. But yeah, I can see what you mean.

It only occured to me to re-read the reply before fixing some of the obvious mistakes.

Anyway, I may not have a beta-reader but I do have an editor (I had two but life got the best of one and had to step down) and it takes a while for them to edit out any mistakes. I'm currently in search for a new editor or perhaps editors.

Side note: There a story over a million words long on FIMfiction?

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Ah okay

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oh shoot i miss read the dates i thought it said 2016

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are there comming more chapters

This is awesome do more please