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Uncle Smiles


Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

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wait is it a reboot or a sequel you put in the description

Reboot, I had to put that there.

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So, this story is the actual Jak, and not some guy dressed up as him who randomly got his powers via Displaced?

(Also, could you click the little reply button in the upper right corner of my comment box? Otherwise, I won't get a notification of your reply.)

6796482 It's displaced, but he doesn't get Jaks powers right away in the past. I've also changed it from being unlimited to having to either drain the plant life, absorb magic or find Eco vents.

The events of Jak 2 and 3 take place in Equestrias past, while the present will contain bits and pieces of things from the Jak universe, for instance Metal Heads, Haven City, that kin of stuff.

You're welcome mate.

the reboot ROCKS!!!!!!!!

amazing so far man. also, PM me when you get to a point where it would be a good time for Krimson to make his appearance

I still absolutely enjoy your writing and I must admit you are doing much better with your grammar. Also loved the chapter.

6804003 I'll Pm you why the fifteen percent dragon DNA with the next chapter.

6804016 Cool, looking forward to it.

And now everything is in order. The fun begins...

Well that's one way of getting a token

Gave it a shot, but it wasn't for me.

“I might've gotten ballsy and tracked down a Metal Pede. It found me and I swore I was going to die then and there. So, on instinct, I punched it. When I opened my eyes to see if I was in hell, I saw Metal Pede, what's left of it anyways.” He explained, making me chuckle at his stupid decision.

..... Jak, Jess, and Cyrux fought a Metal Pede and had trouble with it and yet this guy took care of one with one punch..... -_-

Also vocies in Jaks head, here we go.

Through it all, I couldn't help but laugh, and when I did it only made even angrier.
It should be It only made them even angrier

What's the song? The clip turned private.

YEA!!!!! I love the song Cry Thunder!!

Man.. I can go for some bacon-bits right now.

i would say this is more of a reboot then a sequel sense you canceled the last one

In the words of tfs alucard gilda you done goofed:pinkiecrazy:

Ha! I remember that part!

"I picked up the nearest book and threw it behind me, earning a shout from the Moncaw as he was rudely woken up by the book.
My sides... They hurt... Cant... Stop... Laughing... SEND AN AMBULANCE!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Personally do i prefer stories where curse words arent used, and where the writer rather use unique wordings to insult their intended target instead.

Looking forward to see where this is going Even tough it is a bit confusing so far.

SHIP IT LIKE FED EX!! *STARTS SINGING* SHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIP SSSSHHHHHHIPPP SSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPPPPP SHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIPSHIP SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPP!! IT LIKE FED EX!!

Didn't this already happen when he was out for two weeks

Is his drake form your doing or is it in the game if not in the game it kinda upset me that he hast to use the form because its not his abilities from the game still good story though

Hopefully to see now chapel soon ?

8257991 I don't know to be honest... I just think people don't really read this fic anymore and it's not that I rely on people reading it to continue writing.... It's just... I don't know, maybr it's just all in my head.

If it helps I like your story and I'm hoping that you put out and New chapter I enjoyed it a lot makes me laugh

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It's a possibility that I wrote something like that before and had completely forgotten. I can't really remember

hay continue it I like where this is going:twilightsmile::heart:

continue it i like to see more soon this is a good story:heart:

Jak and Daxter are getting a Live action movie

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