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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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Cancelled due to ineptitude, possibly (but not likely) to be revised later on.


Sombra wasn't always an overlord: he used to be a normal pony, like you and me. Well: if you could call the most high-ranked Guardian Mage in the Crystal Empire, who had also caught the eye of the Emperor's daughter normal, that is.

You want me to tell the sad tale of the Tyrant, little foal?
Very well, but be warned...

Some of the worst evils on the world were done with the best intentions.

A short segment of my first take on the History of Equestria. (Yes, I have two complex Equine timeline headcanons. I'm weird that way.)

Main Storyline: When Dark Stone witnesses the Empire slowly turn against a tribe they helped create, he wonders if he should stand by as innocent ponies are brutally murdered.

Secondary Storyline: Starlight volunteers to read an old story to a particular filly, after Twilight failed to make good on her promise. She fights against her haunting past, as the filly slowly reminds her of the life that was taken from her, and the life she lost.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 13 )

This story is going to be amazing!
I think that the movie that inspired you was The Babadook

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Nope, but you might get it later on.

The way it's organized reminds me of Princess Bride, was that the inspiration?

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Bingo! :twilightsmile:
The story is my own, but the organization is Princess Bride. But expect to see more character development on the reader's side. I'm working on a chapter as we speak!

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Oh, whoops. Forgot to say thanks. :facehoof::twilightblush:

Thanks! :twilightsmile:

Will check out later. From the picture, it looks like a good read

Love where the story is going. I'm almost jealous(Almost):rainbowkiss:

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Thank you. And thank you for adding this to your favourites! :twilightsmile:

7449888 No problem. I hope it gets even better.

What is the second complex Equine timeline headcanon?

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The second one is... a long story... twenty-two books worth, to be exact... :twilightsheepish:

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This is more of a side project, for when I'm stuck on my other stories, yet still need to put my creativity and effort into something. I still try my best to make it good, but it doesn't update often.

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