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I tend to be more romantic than I am poetic.

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Luna's and Celestia's reaction was prices-less :rainbowlaugh: Here's to hoping for a part two.

thank god this didn't go the way i thought this was going for a second at the title I thought this would turn from sex to vore but it didn't

This was hilarious, I wouldn't mind a sequel as long as it's just as comedic.

A sequel is demanded!!!!!!!:yay:

*Fans self* O- Oh my...

The title and general assumptions of clop made this a rather misleading (i.e.: it seems to hint vore, even though it isn't in the slightest), but very fun and enjoyable story to read. Might be worth considering putting a spoilered line of the sex acts contained to clarify this for those that are wary.

Otherwise, very nicely done.

I would like seconds please :pinkiehappy:

Will make sequel if demands are high enough

Si

If it's just as funny i wouldn't mind a sequel.

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Best part of the story.

Wouldn't mind reading a sequel with Luna and Celestia. Though it should be two parts. One Luna, the other Celestia. It would make the read much more fulfilling as you can flesh their character out better.

More please. :3

Part two with Celestia and Luna is required.
Without it, all major systems will shut down.
Protocol_RESPONSEFAILURE() is on standby, and ready to terminate all other programs if necessary.

7321306 CUE ODE TO JOY!!!

Sequel... nao!!

Do it ya pansy!!

I shall seek out the nearest mountain before officially voicing my own demand.

Ofcourse we need a sequel lolz

Hmmm.... horse pussy :eeyup:

Yeash your story is amazing

Comment posted by Nataniel deleted Jul 11th, 2016

SEQUEL

Don't you guys feel kind of hungry now?

Nice story.

Quick question:
Is the foal from the beginning still around?
And, if yes, what did it think about the story? (Maybe some inspiration for his.. fillyfriend.)

ummm.......................

I don't know what to think of this.

Yes I would like to see would that sequel will play out.

7517280 Funny. It's almost lunch for me :rainbowlaugh:

Tiz a... Interesting read... 9/10 Not enough Twilight.

Man, that was ridiculous, in a good way.

MOG LOL

I The beginning when he made a statement about not eating vegetables and maybe eating meat I thought perhaps he was eating insects.

When the filly came in I knew exactly what happen. I couldn't stop chuckling after that.

Friend of mine told me about having incident where he was having sex with his wife in the bedroom one night, and his three-year-old daughter comes in, misunderstands what's happening, runs over to the bed and jumps on dad's back and says: "giddyup! horsey!"

Rather giving a straightforward simple answer, he had to go into this long drawn out story… it's so much like his personality!

The moment Luna interrupted, my mind threw up an imagined scene of the Phoenix Wright courtroom after a testimony like this. :rainbowlaugh:

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how do you react to something like that

you can't throw the kid off you that'd make the situation worse than it already is


do you just lay there?

However, Celestia wasn't listening to Luna's agony, what lingered in her mind was August's member protruding from his pants as he "testified" against his crime.

Celestia placed a hoof at Luna's shoulders, her eyes carrying a certain anxiety that Luna had never seen before in her sister. "D-do you think August has room in his stomach for one more mare?"

Looks like Molly wants the D. :trollestia:

fic great
pic hell no

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