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RuinQueenofOblivion


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Scootaloo has always looked up to Rainbow Dash as a mentor and surrogate sister, but she doesn't know everything about the older Pegasus. When she finds out Rainbow Dash's secret, she sets out to try and help her be happy again.

Listen to it Here: Sisters Forever

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Comments ( 22 )

This is the first time I've ever read this setup where Scootaloo adopts Rainbow. Very well done. Short and sweet

7280076 Yeah, as far as I know I'm the first one to actually try it, which is kind of weird, you'd think it would be the natural reverse of how it usually goes.

This was really sweet! For once Scootaloo is not the orphan yay:yay:! Great job!:rainbowkiss::scootangel:

An original concept, pretty good. I think it could benefit from being a little longer, but I know it was intended to be short.

7280084 num num need more tasty story must have more:pinkiecrazy:

bah! loved t! lol nice and fresh take on it is nice.

i must say, i add stories to the sad shelf if they meet 2 conditions. otherwise it just gets faved.

1) sad story setting, that makes me sad

2) makes me cry.

this met the second criteria xD sad setting didn't come into play till the latter end of the tale, sorry mate. u deserve more publicity.

this actually hits home, but i was barely 5 when i got put up

Wow! Scoots makes the move this time! I love it!

Role reversals for the win!

7280705 Yeah, with how often the other way around is done, I felt that this would be an interesting take on their relationship.

7280584 Heh, yeah, I'm glad you liked it.

7280560 Well, umm, thanks, I try my best, I've been on a real Scootaloo thing lately, what can I say, I've got a soft spot for that filly. Glad everyone seems to like this fanfic, except those three people who downvoted it, what's up with that?

7280554 Well, this was supposed to be a one-shot, but you never know, might do more with this universe in the future.

7280415 Yeah, like I said above I might do more with it in the future, or if anyone wants to write a sequel.

7280323 Well, yeah, that was kind of the point, but thanks.

7281330 lol i was confused by that too. any number of reasons really. oh well, keep it up! like your work!

7281375 Eh, I always get at least one downvote... except strangely in my fanfic Returning Home, not that I'm complaining mind you.

Great to read a story, where Scootaloo is the one helping Rainbow:scootangel:
Good story!

Huh nice twist on things
GG Lots of RE

Hello there! I enjoyed this story so I narrated it. Hope you don't mind :twilightsmile:

"Its okay, they died a long time ago... when I was around your age," Rainbow said sadly. "Sorry Scootaloo, I shouldn't be dumping all of this you."

It should be

"Its okay, they died a long time ago... when I was around your age," Rainbow said sadly. "Sorry Scootaloo, I shouldn't be dumping all of this on you."

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