Dash has been having a crisis of faith in the Wonderbolts, and her teammates have noticed. They aren't the only ones, and finally Spitfire's had enough of it so she sends Dash's marefriend to go and see what is the matter.
Contains Twidash shipping, and Spitfire/Rainbow friendship
Amazingly enough for this premise, NOT a Wonderbolts-Bashing fic. Probably the only fic I'll ever write that that touches on the events of "Newbie Dash" and "A Canterlot Wedding Part 1".
(New art property of Jykinturah)
Chapters (1)
Good story, another fav. And it's Soarin not Soaring!
This was a sweet, but sad fic. I enjoyed every moment of it. There is little to none spelling/grammar errors that I could see. All the characters seem to be in-character with their show counter-parts, even if Rainbow Dash is being a bit too sensitive. It had a very simple and understandable plot. I really couldn't find much wrong with this piece. It stuck out, and I enjoyed it. It was smooth too, with a few good words, such as "deadpanned".
8/10. Would recommend.
7281339 Ah, thanks. I was always confused on the proper spelling. Next time I use him in a fic, I'll make sure it's correct.
7281388 Yeah, I love the use of "deadpanned" It's one of my all time fave words, probably because at times I can be a bit deadpan myself.
"C'mon, y'all. Let's go check on the princess." Applejack said and she and her friends followed after the soon to be crowned Prince.
umm prince
7281524 Well, I figured prince being a title it should be capitalized.
bleh.
I really enjoyed it,great job!! :3
Actually the whole idea of nicknames for mistakes is mean and stupid. How would you feel if you made a harmless but dumb mistake and nobody ever let you forget it by making a nickname out of it and for the rest of your life called you by that nickname. I don't think I like it much.