• Member Since 11th Feb, 2012
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Twilicorn


I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥

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Dinky's slowly been inheriting her mother's eso- and exotropia. But because they caught it when she was young, there's surgery to fix it. And though Dinky originally wanted it, as the day approaches, second thoughts hit her with a train. But she can't back out. Follow her fears and terror through this.

Art is not mine.
This is written as a two-shot(?) the first chapter today, the second tomorrow, after my surgery. I only have exotropia, but it has extended to both my eyes, and as I'm forced into it, I feel I'm losing my connection to Derpy Hooves even more.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

This is, it's, it's. OH GOD IT'S BEAUTIFUL. :applecry: You have made Dinky the most adorable pony ever. :derpytongue2:

There were a few punctual errors, but this is a VERY good story.

awsome,continue?

I still lost how a Pegasus mare as a Unicorn Daughter

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The same way two earth ponies (the Cakes) can have unicorn and pegasus kids. Either that, or Dinky's adopted.

This is a true story. AKA it just happened to me.

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I'm deathly afraid of any surgical procedure, but not because of the actual surgery part. I'm deathly afraid of laughing gas and anything that induces sleepy/loopiness. So I hope whatever surgery you had went better than mine.

I kind of wish there was a little more description, but it was a short and sweet story overall.

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Thank you. And let's put it this way- I honestly asked if I had to breathe in teh laughing gas. And fought it for about ten minutes xD But it wasn't that bad. I can still barely see, and if I do it's double, but I promised y'all a finished story

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You really didn't have to finish the story while still drugged up, Obselescence may have pulled it of well enough but it's still not a very good idea.

I'm completely sane... I promise xD No, eyesurgery generally makes eyesight difficult. Hooves crossed it doesn't get infected, because if it does, they may have to reperform surgery /shudder.

Love this story. I went through eye surgery recently myself, so it really resonates... love the emotion in it! Hope your own eyes have done well after the surgery, too. *Grin*

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Besides the fact I'm going to have another year or so of eye therapy after this, I'm fine :)

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