Derpy explains her medical condition to her daughter.
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Very sweet. I'd give it five stars, but I can't rate right now for some reason.
glad to see I'm not the only one that assumed derpy's problem is only a case of Lazy Eye (i'm still working on the story for that)
I really enjoyed reading this piece! Keep up the great work, I look for more from you!
Very nicely written, liked it a lot, would you consider doing a sequel/continuation of this?
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Yeah, for some reason when you are inside the story, you can't rate it. Try going to the description or the author's personal page, that always works for me.
This brought some tears to my own eyes.
Great job.
I have lazy eye :P I greatly connect with Derpy for that reason. Beautiful story- I can't say much else. I gave it a 5 star rating after looking for a 6th star for a few minutes xD
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I am not sure who I should thank for featuring this, but thank you. This is the first work that I have read in a little while that really made me smile. The writing style is excellent, descriptions are masterfully handled, and you can feel the emotion in the piece. I have said this before and I will say it again, wonderful work, please keep it up!
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No tears were shed, but this was a great story
Five stars without question
I like this Derpy better than canon Derpy
It's official.
Fanon Derpy is the best Derpy.
And Derpy is the best Pony.
Ergo, therefore, and thus, by that logic,
Fanon Derpy is the best Pony!
Have some stars!
Very nice. I like the Fluttershy reference you made in there, though the title of the episode escapes me at the moment.
very well done
i loved it all
keep it coming boss
that is all
kthanxbai
I always thought Derpy had a glass eye.
Derpy always makes me sad, good job sir. I hate stories that just assume she's a dumb clutz, I like ones that go deeper.
I liked this
5 stars
I'm sorry, I can't seem to rate or comment right now, as I'm leaking brain lubricant from my eyes, and thus can't see very well...
~ Moonstone, Minstrel of Equestria
218334 yes indeed they were my friend they were indeed...
star nazi say "five star for you!"
and well done really liked how you portrayed derpy 
Well i sure liked this story.
This wasn't as "moving" as 'The Ballad of Derpy Hooves," but it was still beautiful. Five stars.
So cute!
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The one with the magazine covers with Fluttershy on them? "Green Isn't Your Color".
This was beautiful. Just amazing, especially for how short it was. 5/5, you deserve more though.
All I can say is, "D'AWWW"
I thought this story was very cute. Its simplicity was astounding, and the fact that the story went deeper than "Derpy ist ein dumb klutz" brought zero tears to my eyes, because I'm a monster and can't cry at sad or touching moments. I had to use freaking eye drops!
218325 You took the words right out of my mouth.
That was cute and well-written. I can hear the dialogue in Derpy's canon voice without her coming off sounding dumb.
Cute, sweet and effective. Nice short.
I kind of like that you didn't go all out on this. It has a sort of softness to its story that's admirable. When so many stories seem to tear at the heart strings so barbarically, it's nice to see a story that, for the most part, knows how to utilize a softer touch in plucking them.
D'aaawwwwww!!1 Sooo good XD
And there was much sad D'awwww.
Bravo.
Great little slice of life. Sweet and believable, with wisdom and a keen eye. This is no ham-handed cliche, this is real life in effigy. In other words, art. Well done!
I loved how you were able to refer to a couple of the episodes.
it wasnt the fact that you made derpy NOT seem like a klutzy idiot that astonished me. it was your vocabulary!
seriously, those are some pretty descriptive words. 
like it overall, so 5 stars. 
218572 Wow, never heard that before. I like it.
Beautiful story. Just beautiful.
All of my poni. Take it all! And all of my stars!
The levels of D'aaaw are of the charts.
Honestly, I thought Lazy Eye was a myth... learn something new everyday.
ALL MAH STARS.
Well that was a great reading.
I loved your narration, very detailed.
5 out of 5, no doubt.
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d'awwww
Hmm. What there is is well written, but to me its feels unfinished. Also, I assume that at this point Derpy hasn't suffered from the condition for very long yet since she mentions doctors are still looking into it, but at the same time the flashbacks do suggest she has had to live with it for a while now already.
I like this. It's a good reason. Not just 'oh lolol, she is dum cuz she got cross-eyes, muffins!'. You sir, are getting four stars from me.
D'AAAWW
Please, for the love of Celestia get this on EqD! This needs to be submitted! These kinds of heart warming stories are the best... 5 stars good sir. 5 stars.
Twas nice. But it wasn't sad, in the end.
that was very sweet, a very enjoyable read. 5 stars for you!
Aww, that's so sweet. Very nicely written story.
Very sweet, not sad, but very sweet. Excellent job, my bro
Very sweet, not sad, but very sweet. Excellent job, my bro