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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

Comments ( 14 )

Interesting idea about Rainbow's parentage. I think I've seen a few fics with the same idea, but none were executed like this.

Anyway, a little bare bones, and I'd recommend beefing up the clop-scene if that's the main focus of the fic. All in all though nice work, have a like.

Well at least daring was able to skip the 11 month gestation period. I would be curious to find out what RD thinks of this, if she even knows.

7241007 This is meant to be when she is young, and just because one is a 'strong female' doesn't mean they must be the most secually awakened woman in the world.

7241030 It's there because of tenderness, and even if one has touched themselves, that doesn't mean they aren't a virgin. And even then, if all they've used is their own hands, they may think that tender touches are what is meant to be used.

It's regularly used because of the emotion behind it, and because it can lend a cute, closeness to scenes.

A rather pleasant story.

Hmm...very fun and enjoyable, and an interesting origin story for Rainbow Dash.

Of course, now I want to see a sequel or epilogue chapter where Rainbow starts gushing about being a fan of Daring Do - and even meeting her and getting to adventure with her - to her Dad. Either that, or just his reaction to seeing the book cover with them both on it.

7241030 Yea, friend, I think you're confusing yourself with 'touching oneself' with having actual sex with another person. I'm 20 and a virgin, since masturbation doesn't count. When I have my first time, I'd rather it at least start gentle. Save the sex crazed animal side for other occasions. (Hell, some people are turned off by that) I also fail to see how asking someone to 'be gentle' during sex is any indication of whether or not someone is a capable explorer since they're so unrelated.
Honestly, it just sounds like you're nitpicking because the story didn't match your sexual tastes.

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I know this is (kinda, no offense) clop. But why are we now talking about sex? If you don't like it then dislike and leave, find something else. And you don't need to use your personal life to prove an unnecessary point, just shhh.

Aw, this was a cute ending. I've also heard the Daring Do is Rainbow Dash's mother theory before, I think works a bit. The series proper has yet to correct any of that, probably never will. It would be funny if the series proper confirmed it, Rainbow's reactions over it would be adorably amusing.

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Of course, now I want to see a sequel or epilogue chapter where Rainbow starts gushing about being a fan of Daring Do - and even meeting her and getting to adventure with her - to her Dad. Either that, or just his reaction to seeing the book cover with them both on it.

+this^

...Or, if JumbledThought doesn't write it, could you please? I'm sure you can do it justice!

Interesting take on a characters origin story,and we yet to see Rainbows "Real" mother. I'll stick with this for now.

And the legacy of Rainbow Dash was born...

Needs the scene where Dash meets her mother and catch up, preceded by the one where her father tells her how she came to be. But a nice story nonetheless.

A nice story !!!!!

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