Fluttershy never thought she would be called "Cute" before. Now that she has, she doesn't like it one bit.
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Summer Dancer
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I know the feeling.
...
I'm sorry, Flutters, but there's no denying it.
That was a cute...
Er...
Nice story.
Nice job!
7228572 Thanks! Writing Fluttershy is hard, I never wrote her as a main character before
Congrats on getting featured
Needs... More... SPIKE!
"Hey so I just saved your life from a Hydra and I'm mad at you for calling me cute, so the least you can do is forgive me for forgetting your name."
7228506 Yes eLLen, you're cute too!
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7229168 Can confirm, 10/10 cute
I finally managed to find/ stumble into a Fluttershy (Explore Equestria series). Yay, finally got myself FS. And she's adorable.
(Kinda ticked off that Starlight is part of the series, but no Sunset anywhere.)
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Don't worry too much. For a first-time attempt at writing about Fluttershy, this seems pretty decent.
I'll give a more insightful comment later regarding the story and the technical details.
Can we call you adorable Fluttershy-?
Hmm. I wonder what that guy's name was though.
As always, great story Summer!
7229355 Thanks Kids! He shall forever be the pony without a name
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Doh! Blasted Spike sending letters at just the wrong time!
7228943 Thank you!
7229367 Dang, it Spike!!!
plot twist his name is blue pony or Yew something lol
Well that was random.
(That seriously felt like something out of Clerks...)
Would it matter if she was?
Plus, y'know...Spike can breathe fire at it.
Yeah, it's not like Fluttershy ever vanquished a dragon and a cockatrice or anything. It's not like Pinkie Pie saved Ponyville from a swarm of Parasprites.
Why do I get the feeling I know exactly where this is going?
Oh. Guess I was wrong. Makes more sense, though. I thought it was mad because somepony called it cute.
That was a fun little read. Love the running joke with Blue pony's name.
Denying that you're cute just makes you seem cuter.
Ha! Yeeeeeep! I know all about that!
I'm terrible with names and of course being too embarrassed to admit it and not wanting to come off as rude I regularly end up having full conversations with acquaintances while having absolutely no clue what their name is!
So nice portrayal of Flutters I guess! And it's certainly interesting to think about how she might feel about her fans and their... general... view of her
Then again...
Pinkie's got the right idea there...
7229473 yes it does
7229365 Plot
: Button Mash actually knew and yelled his name when he was snatched by the Hydra.
Yes, that means his name is Random Pony. Problem?
That is what the title reminded me of. Watch the video in full its funny as hell
One too many When's here.
I love the story by the way.
The characterization was just top notch.
I especially liked Spike and Pinkie in this, that first fee scene where Pinkie and Spike were just talking before Fluttershy arrived. I think it would be kinda awesome to see a story about Pinkie and Spike spending the day together and getting into trouble.
But the true gold of this fic was the Shy one. Nice.
So many yays.
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7229180 I am not!
Like this?
7230132 SO VERY CUTE.
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7230132 Yes you is!
That deserves a like.
I hate being called "cute".
Why does it makes me want to call her cute even more?
Am I an horrible person for going against the wishes of such a cu-er... nice pony?
Anyway, that story was... cute!
Wow, that sounds like a new episode of tv show. Except Spike, isn't cowering when the hydra attacks and it has 85% less Starlight. So I really like this story. (Spike is my favorite in the show and I believe they are over using Starlight.)
Uh. K.
7229420 Blue Yew.
-looks towards camera-
Poor Fluttershy doesn't realize that ponies are both cute and adorable.
Pretty fun.
One thing though, it sounds odd that Fluttershy says "when I release you". It isn't an actual spell, that stare and it would work just as well without that sentence, if you just went with “You’re going to put my friend down, and you’re going to tell me what’s wrong. Understand?” and not sound so much like she was using a spell or a physical bond.
Well done otherwise.
The moral of the the story?
Hydras sleep in water?
Cutie calls instead of cat calls? Oh, that was clever.
I find the phrasing of this incredibly disturbing. I know what is meant to be said here, but the way it's set up, it seems like Spike is doing something a tad bit more morbid.
Other than that, fun.
Good story I had a few good laughs.
7232516 Hahaha
I did almost put knocked, but I thought that sounded violent 
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It should actually be "rapping" rather than "wrapping".
7232882 Ahh. Fixed.
Aww
How cut-
Hmmm.....I wonder what would happen if someone called her silly....probably nothing
Come on, Fluttershy. Don't deny it. You know you're a cute pony.
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Anyways, that was a nice and fun story to read.