Sunset Shimmer needs a job, and there don't seem to be many to choose from for someone in her position. Fortunately, she stumbles across a part time entry level position as a security guard at a local cemetery. The only problems are the place is rumored to be haunted, and it's the graveyard shift.
I can see Rainbow pulling a few tricks on Sunny then Sunny pays Dashy back BIG time.
OMg, is there a sequel ??
7692549 If you think of one, let me know
The opening was a little slow, but that may be because I know bits of what was gunna happen going in. Few nitpicks aside, once the story started unfolding it was quite a lot of fun and well-paced
The writing for Rainbow Dash and Sunset Shimmer are both pretty good. I could "hear" the characters speaking their dialogue. Good mixture of humor and suspense throughout, as well as tying in elements from MLP and EQG.
People who're asking for more want to know what's up with Stone Grey. There's stuff that can still be explored here.
Peace
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Thanks! That's probably a result of me watching Rainbow Rocks and Friendship Games seven hundred times (though that's an exaggeration... it's probably closer to six hundred fifty).
7691991 Maybe that's the sequel.
Though I'm not sure Sunset is the type.
The Prankster is Stone Grey!
"And I would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for you meddling kids!"
7762270 I forgot to put the part where the kids drive off in a blue and green van
Wow, that was Great! You can start a MAGE Sunset story right here!
(If only the Magic used were real)
8045205 I don't know what that means, but all the same thanks for the kind words!
For some reason I picture sunset having her hair up In a ponytail when she's in the uniform.
Sequel please.
PLEASE THIS STORY NEEDS A SEQUEL. Also, can you write more stories that include Rainbow Dash cuz its more fun when she's in the story.