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Bad Horse


Beneath the microscope, you contain galaxies.

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The day after Hearth's Warming, Snowfall Frost thinks back to her encounter with Applejack and decides that maybe she hasn't learned her lesson, not entirely. Maybe she needs a refresher.

It's time to put the romance back in necromancy.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 96 )

Well done! I knew right from the description that this would be because of PresentPerfect.

Is this story actually incomplete, or is that a mistag? :duck:

7216645 It is actually incomplete. I have a plan for it which will run about another 500 words, but I haven't written most of them yet. Probably first thing tomorrow morning. That reminds me--I need to add another character tag.

This is a good idea.
Nothing bad can come from this idea.
Because it is a good idea.
Not a bad one.

7216645 You mean clopfics about Applejack spirit walking through Snowfall? That was hilarious!

More proof that Present Perfect is a bad influence and needs to be stopped.:trollestia:

Applejack: The ghost with the most.

This might be the best thing I've read in a long time.

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It is obvious that the author of this episode watched the movie "High Spirits" at some point.

Y'know, I just had an incredibly important question come to mind. Is what Snowfall doing can be considered necrophilia?

Wow i like the reaction of snofrost aka starlight glimmer shivers in fright is really funny and cute :rainbowkiss: she like a cat shivering btw amazing fic

I want to grammar-nazi this...

but it's quite obviously deliberately bad...

And kind of sexy...

so I won't.

I... Holy... Just.....
Lol. Pure and simple. That was hilarious.

The sexiest of lols are had this day.

And yet you won't participate in the Writeoffs due to the time limit. :trollestia:

7217205 You're reading the wrong things. :eeyup:

7218198 Oh, no. The story, yes. The grammar? Nazi it if you can. I do Nazi any mistakes. The first sentence of the third chapter is ugly, but I think it's correct.

You're talking about my commas, aren't you? Chicago stylists are always going after my commas. :fluttercry:

7218510 Did you even read this story? :rainbowhuh:

Wait... yes, you probably did. :rainbowderp:

I don't get the ending but I loved the story:pinkiehappy:

.... I blame PP for this.

This makes me believe in the spirit of Christmas all over again.

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It needs to be some day other than Saturday for me. I am BUSY most weekends and simply not available to write on Saturdays. Writeoff.me is Saturdays for the short fics and the weekend for the longer fics.

Why can't they move it around a bit? If they did a short fic on a Wednesday, or a long fic from Monday to Wednesday even occasionally then they would get other people participating.

I can't be the only one who has troubles with Saturdays.

Abstract thought: There has to be a Spirit of Hearth Warming Not To Come.

And Snowfall has probably met that spirit at some point.

Comment posted by alfonso_rd_33 deleted May 17th, 2016

Welp, I think you've definitely lived up to your name with this one.:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

That ending was just the best.
This whole thing was good, hilarious even.

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I have not yet, no. I just know things. :pinkiecrazy:

. . .


Well, alrighty then. :rainbowderp:

the the four Hearth’s Warming presents

Double the's.

7218550 Fun fact, if you don't reply to someone in the same chapter that they commented, they don't get notified.

7219276 Whoops! You got me. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Nazi. :trixieshiftright:

Comment posted by Bad Horse deleted May 16th, 2016

7219363 Oh no! Not German science!

7219280 Wow, thanks for pointing that out. I've been doing that for... years.

At first when I saw this story I thought:

https://derpibooru.org/1154077

But a Luna Is Fine, Too.

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Someone can throw more light on that for me - I couldn't find anything in PresentPerfect fics?
If it is some M-link PM?

7219373 Did you double comment or something? Because it looks like you double commented.

7219389 I AM SO STEALING THAT FOR THE DESCRIPTION

Okay, I'm surprised no one thought of Family Guy here :rainbowlaugh:

"If I walk through you, does that mean, like, we've done it?" :rainbowderp:

7219414 I deleted a comment replying to your comment because your comment said you wouldn't be notified of the reply...

7219389 I owe you for that--the views went up after I added that line to the description!

Too bad for you I never honor my debts. :trixieshiftright:

Why Bad Horse? Why are you so good at comedy? Do you have an editor?

This was funny by the way. Very funny.

you know, when I saw this episode, I just KNEW that there would be a shipping sparked from it, But the shipping I expected was starlight and dash, not starlight and AJ.

Well, technically it's snow frost, but still.

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Mission accomplished.

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Twice over.

7219619 honour, you colonial hick. At least I have the good grace to be from the right colony.

In more relevant news, this was horrifying. And chuckleworthy. But mostly horrifying. Necromancy and romance don't even share the same root!

Actually, I have no idea if they do or don't. Hmmm.

Hilarious! One quick thing I noticed, though:

“Maybe not how different,” the mare added, eyeing Starfall’s bound figure.

Shouldn't that be Snowfall?

just wow.... just wow.... wow....:rainbowlaugh:ROR

This... this story was stupid. But it made me laugh a lot.
Which means I loved it. Great job :rainbowlaugh:

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