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This story is a sequel to Shadows' Call


The Blood's Eye Event. A cult, bent on releasing their master from Tartarus, foalnapped over four dozen fillies and colts to farm them for their life energy. They fooled the princesses, avoided the detection of the guards, and would have succeeded if not for a filly and her friend.
That was two months ago.
Since then, Black Diamond had gone back to her life as Diamond Tiara, and Featherdown has been living with the recently returned Midnight Star. Both are making progress in their training as Shadow Rangers. The colts and fillies that they saved have for the most part rallied behind the flag of the filly who led them directly, flooding the ranks of the Crusaders' Manehatten Branch. The cultists have been imprisoned, with any of their escaped comrades actively hunted down by the guard.
And Demon Blood has not given up on his quest to return.
He knows who stands in his way. He knows he needs to deal with them. And thanks to them, he knows how.
The last time, he lost to untapped potential. Now his enemies will fall to the same power.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 15 )

Diamond stood again in the center of a circle of enemies, but this time, it felt different to all involved.
The balance of power was clear

Diamond is a little too OP in my opinion. :scootangel:

We are the ones without a voice. The children of the futures that your kind stole from us.

So the unborn are spermatozoïde who hasn't reach the goal. For each foal unborn, there is thousand of unfoal. That's a lot of foes. :applejackconfused:
Can't wait for the gang to fight their own unfoal.

7389534 It isn't so much that she's overpowered as it is that they're underpowered. The generic unfoals are one trick ponies whose trick doesn't work on Diamond. A large part of this is them having no idea what to do about the fact that she can touch them.

And yes, that's the basic idea behind the unfoals. There are a few technical points that'll be explained later, but I'm rather pleased that I wasn't confusing about that.

Demon Blood is a pony, right?

7447681 Yes, the Alicorn of Tartarus to be precise.

So what happens next? Does Diamond Tiara and her shadow ranger counterpart successfully recruit Applebloom's now husband to the shadow rangers?

7469472 Seriously why would you reply with a spoiler alert, it was just two simple questions I asked out of curiosity.

7469892 No particular reason, just feeling impish.

7469937 Okay then, but still what will happen next

7470513 We're actually getting very close to the point where they blow a hole in reality.

“It used to be that the lost foals that washed ashore on my island were abandoned, forgotten, or had simply wandered off. Nowadays, it’s far more common to see them show up because their parents don’t let them grow up.”

I finally get it, the unborn are babies dying mid pregnancy. Can't imagine ponies doing an abortion though.

7528106 Not quite. Think more along the lines of "If he had married her instead of her."

There is one case where you're right though, but that's a little ways down the road yet. And complicated.

Also, Pan Pipes' lost foals are unrelated to the unfoals, which is why Spike is in danger of becoming one. Sorry if I was confusing about that.

This story... it lives. IT LIVES!!

Interesting rereading this again. Thanks for updating!! :raritywink:

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