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A thousand years ago, two sisters - Luna and Celestia - overthrew Discord and freed Equestria. They later went on to have many more adventures together, before the younger sister fell to her greed and jealousy and became the dreaded Nightmare Moon.

In the present day, six mares uncovered a set of six artifacts, the Elements of Harmony, that combined to form an ancient power from the days of Discord's fall and thus they became the new protectors of Equestria.

A long time ago there was a pony who had a single wish that he wanted with all his heart, and so he flew to the stars to ask if they would grant his wish for him. Today he watches over us from the stars he once pleaded with, to grant the wishes made to the rising star with the chime of midnight. Or so the tale following the legend of The Mare in the Moon says.

Everyone knows the old mare's tales, but even more they know the story of the royal sisters. They know the tales of how Celestia and Luna overthrew tyrants, imprisoned monsters, and toppled evil wherever they could. But what they don't know is this: They didn't do it alone.

History is repeating itself, secrets are coming to light, and Equestria is about to have it's entire history turned on it's ear.

The present is about to get very interesting.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 19 )

Can't wait to see where this goes… this is one of the best fic's I've seen on this site I wish I had more time to give a full review but ……
I'd give this an 8.75/10

3255074 Thanks for the comment and support:twilightsmile:

Fun and good story. I like your use of words and epic foreshadowing.

That was epic. Though I don't really know what happened other than a really cool prophetic song and flashes of light but it worked

What has happened to them I must know!!!

Have they all been turned into Alicorns and are Sunbeam and Moondancer really Celestia and Luna?

Yay but what happened to Lotus and Contrail?

3480995 Yes, Thanks for your reviews. Have a moustache:moustache::twilightsmile:

3481042 They're just offscreen right now. I'll get back to them eventually.

Thanks for reviewing.:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

Sorry that ending really confused me can you please elaborate on what happened and where are Lotus and Contail please?

3481125 Sorry, frankly, the ponies were rather confused as well.

So, Lotus Blossom and Contrail were both doing exactly what Inkwell/Midnight had been doing. Returning to their former lives. The group had kept in touch, but they weren't exactly close. So they both faded into the background for a little while. Like the rest, they'll be returning, don't worry, but this story was largely focused on the origins of Midnight Star, and that little bit where he decided to take on the mantle of alicorn hero they weren't honestly a large part of.

Basically, while Midnight was having his conversation with the draconequui, Contrail was selling produce at his parents' store and Lotus Blossom was watering her garden.

As for the stuff here, I know, slightly confusing. But it was groundwork that needed to be laid...

6666383 That was a very long wait time. Anyway thank you for clearing that up. Both are Alicorns (secretly) still living out they're lives while all the weird stuff goes on. Nice to see you again.

6671780 Yes it was. And thank you, it's good to be back.

6672299 Albuquerque, New Mexico. The church I belong to does two year long proselyting missions, and I left on one.

6672410 well I admire your commitment. Not something I could do. Anyway I look forward to more of your work.

6672607 Thank you on both counts.

If Inkwell, Moonchaser, Sunbeam, Lotus Blossom, Dust Runner, and Contrail were voiced, what would they sound like?

6879651 Now there's a question I wasn't expecting.
Moonchaser sounds basically like Luna still does. (It's saying you commented on the last chapter, so I'm assuming you've read the whole story)
Sunbeam's voice is a little raspy, almost harsh.
Inkwell's voice is soft, calm, and soothing, though his fluctuates with emotions more than the others.
Lotus Blossom's voice is melodic. Haven't had a chance to show it yet, but she sings more regularly than any of the other characters. (It helps the plants grow)
Contrail's voice almost always carries a note of smug superiority. He also has a tendency to whine.
One of Dust Runner's teeth is chipped, so there's an almost imperceptible squeak or whistle when she talks. Which plays an interesting counterbalance to the formal tones she usually takes. When she's not speaking formally however, her voice tends to quaver noticably.

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