i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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something says that octivava is going to be rather ticked that her table got knocked over spilling her drink.
Wow, Fluttershy must have gotten so druck that she added a other h to her name.
7298072 sorry but octavia's not in this story, I liked the pic had no way to edit her out of it.
7298095 it only happened twice but it's fixed. Also no I wasn't drunk when
I wrote this.
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Well even still, it was still worth a shot and it is still a very funny pic.
7298129 Umm... Your title is still Fluttershhy and Discord Get Drunk. Get rid of the extra H, shy has only one.
Proofreaders. They'll save your life. Or, at least, your story.
Yo- to.
Get rid of the [.
A lot of other typos sprinkled around make it a little distracting, and Fluttershy is jus the tiniest bit OOC, but other than that, it doesn't look too bad! Keep it up!
7303856 well she and dipcord ARE drinking something more grown up than tea so...can you blame her?
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DUDE WHAT THE FCK!?
It's always the quiet ones...
... *faves*
Oh boy, I found a perfect fit to go with my brandy tonight! *Claps behooves together vigorously* ^_^
Nice fic I see you took some inspiration from “lay me to sleep” By Silver muse