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StormLuna
Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
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mmmm seem need do a lot reading being this is number 3 in books
a lot reading to do i have i will be back with you on this page in bit.
true story of life is vatory is good as long person you defended is still themselfs, she is far gone their no one left to defeat or even hate.
this feel more like side story then continuation of the two stories that come before it. that why vote are so split, on the story itself. seem more like a story that take place in the world you created then it being a follow up. kind like the fallout Equestria side stories
7252974 Actually, this story was meant to focus on Starlight and what happened to her after Twilight sent her and Spike away. While it may seem like a side story, I created it to have Starlight fulfill a destiny that I created for her. The other two that follow this will focus more around Twilight and Trixie but Warrior Princess Starlight will be a major character. Ok, I'll admit, I'm extremely biased in favor of Starlight which is why I wrote this. I wanted to ascend her and killing Chrysi and saving the princesses and her friends seemed to be a good way to make that happen.
7253159 in all fairness perfect setup for the story you told. the state of world , but saying it follow up seem out of place a bit.
as for your biased in favor of Starlight well that clear when claim thing like she show so much more promise than twilight. more time then one. that never bother me as much as could have but some other people dont like twilight being well someone cumdump on top being throw to the way side. ahahah that was so cold of you.
You tell too much and show too little. The story feels extremely predictable. Even forgiving characters going wildly ooc, they dont even stay consistent through the story. Also being edgy doesnt look maturenor deep.
That being said, thanks for the story. Keep trying.
Studied tactics and has no clue about field rations.
Basic march logistics key in any military strategy.
fuck no i out. no princess starlight!
she become a princess to fast it years. she going lead EQ in to War!
I really like yout Starlight she's really well developed.
I agree Equestria is notoriously underdefended, their royal guard is beyond useless.
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They had 3 days of training no more they didn't have time to prepare for that.
Good work, you put down the Bug Queen with your bare hooves, impressive.
Yes, you proved yourself worthy.
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She did prove herself to be worthy when things were bleak, she trained an army and lead them with the determination and conviction of a true leader.
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Fate believed she was ready not one pony made that choice, she embraced her destiny and pushed forward.
Hopefully that will keep The Storm King's ass away.
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nope.
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Well Fate did push her here, still it doesn't mean fate is always right.
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I don't care.
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I must admit if they really want to give her an Acension, they should have given her more time to really change. If the show ascends her it must be for a good darn reason.
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what don't get from
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Sorry, My apologies.
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ty I sorry today I am in bad mood. and try to relax. but hard when I keep message up on my phones.
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Fair enough have a good day. I have had those days too.
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I have a feeling it may wind up being her having to save everypony from Chrysalis ON HER OWN. If that winds up being the case, she will clearly be deserving. With Twilight, I think that they really should have saved her ascension for when Tirek was defeated instead of merely fixing a spell.
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Yeah, still it might be what earns her anacension is she reforms Chrysalis, the most stubborn villain about that very subject. She stood up to Starswirl about the whole reformation thing.
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I'm not sure about the reforming Chrysi thing. I would like to see at least one MLP villain stay bad if not two. It would be her and Tirek that would be ruined if they were reformed. I'd say her finding a way to drain her of her powers would suffice.
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Well I've heard that season 8 might have Triek and Chrysalis team up, althoguh this might end up beign a repeat of season 4 where he betrays her in the end or where Starlight convinces her to turn on him.
Starlight likely is a manipulation mage that specialises in time magic which is why this happens.
Spike there are no other options
hahahahahaha
Wow Starlight's Brutal
YES
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Read my "Colgate's Practice" series and that will look like foal's play.
fatality
Well, I like Starlight, but it's just overkill.