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StormLuna
Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.
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Well, I hope the Rainbow of Friendship nor 'The Map' isn't ever needed again. Twilight more than likely lost her five best friends. I know she lost a lot of Celestia's respect.
7203308 Right now the only one who can really use the map is Starlight, and that is for time travel.
7203420 I was talking about the map on the table in the castle that makes their butts light up when they are needed somewhere.
Least they're not calling the Princess of Friendship something else.
That proves it!!
Is Twilight THAT desperately jealous?!!?
Bad ending.
7208434 Don't worry, Twilight won't be Trixie's slave forever. She'll eventually break free of it.
7208339 Good old Twilight response.
its love what the hell
think you should have dragged out spike splitting up twilight to be a slow sad decay of his respect for his former mother and friend. for such long standing relationship that was far to fast. it like this, spike said to Starlight I dont know what happened something has changed she not same person I grow up with. she no longer what happened Starlight as he crying as Starlight hold him like a baby . like how children feel when their single mother get new boyfriend .should have been kind of like that just give pointers for future. I am try not be rude
7208434 indeed
Or, y'know, you could travel back two weeks and say "Yo, Twilight, just came from the future. Trixie's gonna mind control you when the three of us hook up so keep it in your nonexistent pants, m'kay? And hey, Trixie, go fuck your self." It's just, it's kinda a false dichotomy, y'know?
Learn to stay out of the way of other pony's business
You won't do that unless pushed too far.
I like Trixie as a character but I'm putting my hoof down, Twilight and Trixie you deserve each other because you are both being bitches.
I kinda understand, she lost all respect from you when she acts like that.
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I kinda understand Spike is a lot more mature then we give him credit for, he knows that he shouldn't help somepony who is behaving so foolishly.
Oh in the name of Discord, actually Discord fix this shit.
Starlight is talented that's for sure
Back again and damn it Discord pick up
Discord we need your help now!
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Starlight should take her place.
Trixie magic seduction playing
Alright, I can look past a lot of mistakes (though I will still point them out to myself) but this is all getting rather weird. Like this fic may not have been the most internally consistent, as well as being a narrative clusterduck, but it was funny. Now it is an absolute celestial mess, yet it is still funny.
P.S: While I know this is AU, none of the characters so far seemed to have been in character. Celestia was the biggest jarring character break for me though. I mean, her speech is just... so unrefined compared to how she speaks normally.
Trixie you emotional manipulating b****. Alright now that I´m calm I don´t think Trixie would do that to Starlight in my opinion, but I respect your opinion if you disagree. Sorry if I was rude. I like the story so far though.
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Don't worry, Starlight is not one to be manipulated.
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Well you do have a point.
How dare she treat Spike like that.
Well this is unsettling. I can’t believe Trixie would do that to Twilight. Although I have a question, if Trixie knew seduction spells why didn’t she use one on Starlight?